for Lies of the Heart8/31/2005 c17 baloo
Dood. I don't know what urged me to check, of all days, today - but here be an update! haha, I loved that ending. Especially because you didn't overlook the part about the "stinging fist". The downside of being an inexperienced puncher. :P Nice to see things wrapping up finally. But I guess that's a given, considering we only have one more chapter to go. :D
Dood. I don't know what urged me to check, of all days, today - but here be an update! haha, I loved that ending. Especially because you didn't overlook the part about the "stinging fist". The downside of being an inexperienced puncher. :P Nice to see things wrapping up finally. But I guess that's a given, considering we only have one more chapter to go. :D
8/31/2005 c17 
1flonshoe
Hey!Its totally ironic that you updated today cause I was just re-reading this story the other day. Love love LOVE the update! I love girls who'll stand up for themselves, and Natalie totally kicked but in this chapter. I actually think this is my favourite chapter. Everything is just starting to fall into place. I really hope you'll be able to update soon. One more chapter, eh? Exciting!
LuvLauren
1flonshoeHey!Its totally ironic that you updated today cause I was just re-reading this story the other day. Love love LOVE the update! I love girls who'll stand up for themselves, and Natalie totally kicked but in this chapter. I actually think this is my favourite chapter. Everything is just starting to fall into place. I really hope you'll be able to update soon. One more chapter, eh? Exciting!
LuvLauren
8/30/2005 c16 1Starienite
I really enjoyed reading this. Natalie is a bit manipulative, and I was kind of hoping you would develop Sam and MAtt a little more but I really did wnjoy reading it.
1StarieniteI really enjoyed reading this. Natalie is a bit manipulative, and I was kind of hoping you would develop Sam and MAtt a little more but I really did wnjoy reading it.
8/4/2005 c7 Xtreme Nuisance
*points* I KNEW IT! O.o random reviews I know. I'll hopefully leave one long helpful one in the end. :)
*points* I KNEW IT! O.o random reviews I know. I'll hopefully leave one long helpful one in the end. :)
8/4/2005 c4 Xtreme Nuisance
muahaha... I love track. :) Though... I didn't realize that schools actaully split them up to boys/girls teams. ... I've only been on the distance/sprint team... :) RIGHT THEN. *reads more* (holy crap, I know a guy named matt taylor. He rocks my socks man. :))
muahaha... I love track. :) Though... I didn't realize that schools actaully split them up to boys/girls teams. ... I've only been on the distance/sprint team... :) RIGHT THEN. *reads more* (holy crap, I know a guy named matt taylor. He rocks my socks man. :))
8/4/2005 c1 Xtreme Nuisance
*points* holy crap, that is so me, it's ridiculous. I'm gonna LIKE this one. :) all right then. *reads some more*
*points* holy crap, that is so me, it's ridiculous. I'm gonna LIKE this one. :) all right then. *reads some more*
7/25/2005 c16 2IndigoNightOwl
Brilliant story, I just found it and spent half of the night to read it. :)It's funny how sometimes your life is like a cheap soap-opera even when you didn't really do anything. It reminds me a bit of when I was seventeen. Some of the situations I found myself in were absolutely horrible, but so absurd that sometimes I couldn't help but laugh at it all, even then... Still, I'm glad I left that behind me when I left school. ;)Your writing style is really good, it's not easy to find something like this. I was completely enthralled after the first chapter. Very nice how both Jeremy and Matt are genuinely nice, without one of them suddenly becoming evil or something like that just so the main character can run off with the "right" guy.I hope you'll find time to update soon. I'm definitely looking forward to it. :)
2IndigoNightOwlBrilliant story, I just found it and spent half of the night to read it. :)It's funny how sometimes your life is like a cheap soap-opera even when you didn't really do anything. It reminds me a bit of when I was seventeen. Some of the situations I found myself in were absolutely horrible, but so absurd that sometimes I couldn't help but laugh at it all, even then... Still, I'm glad I left that behind me when I left school. ;)Your writing style is really good, it's not easy to find something like this. I was completely enthralled after the first chapter. Very nice how both Jeremy and Matt are genuinely nice, without one of them suddenly becoming evil or something like that just so the main character can run off with the "right" guy.I hope you'll find time to update soon. I'm definitely looking forward to it. :)
7/18/2005 c16 Arcia
Ah...so sad...so sad...
And all through this the only thing I can say is...
Poor Matt...
Ah...so sad...so sad...
And all through this the only thing I can say is...
Poor Matt...
7/2/2005 c16 2Arialla
Poor Matt. And poor Natalie. They're perfect for each other. Please update soon!
~ Aria
2AriallaPoor Matt. And poor Natalie. They're perfect for each other. Please update soon!
~ Aria
6/22/2005 c15 baloo
Complete sidenote - I have a friend named Natalie, who I met pretty recently, and she told me right off I can call her Natalie or Natty. Never Nat. NEVER. Except she gave me one freebie because... huh, I can't remember. I think she misspelled my name or something. Clearly it was quite traumatizing for me. ;P Hehe, I love how she felt even worse about the race when she saw that Matt was there too. SIGN! Ooh man, I so HATE Rachel. I mean, my brother can be a pretty big ass at times, but out there in the world, we'd totally whoop ass on anyone who talked smack about family. :P I think she's the one who needs a bit of whoop ass here. And yeah, I totally cheated. I read the whole chapter, and I didn't even finish any job apps. But the next one, I swear!
Complete sidenote - I have a friend named Natalie, who I met pretty recently, and she told me right off I can call her Natalie or Natty. Never Nat. NEVER. Except she gave me one freebie because... huh, I can't remember. I think she misspelled my name or something. Clearly it was quite traumatizing for me. ;P Hehe, I love how she felt even worse about the race when she saw that Matt was there too. SIGN! Ooh man, I so HATE Rachel. I mean, my brother can be a pretty big ass at times, but out there in the world, we'd totally whoop ass on anyone who talked smack about family. :P I think she's the one who needs a bit of whoop ass here. And yeah, I totally cheated. I read the whole chapter, and I didn't even finish any job apps. But the next one, I swear!
6/5/2005 c16 52SKATENaked-BlindReaper
I really love this story. I WAS rooting for her to end up with Jeremy, but after he and Same broke up I realized that I want her with Matt. So now, I'm going to just hope they end up together. There's something about Jeremey that I just don't like. But then again I'm starting to think that all of the characters are real people because of their flaws. Thats why I like the story so much, it doesn't sound like a fantasy. I really can't wait until this gets updated. Which I hope is soon.
52SKATENaked-BlindReaperI really love this story. I WAS rooting for her to end up with Jeremy, but after he and Same broke up I realized that I want her with Matt. So now, I'm going to just hope they end up together. There's something about Jeremey that I just don't like. But then again I'm starting to think that all of the characters are real people because of their flaws. Thats why I like the story so much, it doesn't sound like a fantasy. I really can't wait until this gets updated. Which I hope is soon.
6/4/2005 c16 1Rhea Larkin
Oh, what climactic drama! What gripping theatrics! I thought this chapter would be the positive pivot-especially when Natalie discovered Matt's journal. I thought she would finally get it. But instead, everything spiraled downhill. How depressing. Poor Natalie. Everything and everyone (except Jeremy) seems to be against her now. Interesting, that at this point she has the boyfriend-whom she's wanted all along-and yet, she's lost her friends. What a sacrifice.
Surely it won't end this way, though. Things have got to look up for Nat in the future, right? Well, I'll be eagerly awaiting your next installment. Bravo again on another brilliant chapter! :)
1Rhea LarkinOh, what climactic drama! What gripping theatrics! I thought this chapter would be the positive pivot-especially when Natalie discovered Matt's journal. I thought she would finally get it. But instead, everything spiraled downhill. How depressing. Poor Natalie. Everything and everyone (except Jeremy) seems to be against her now. Interesting, that at this point she has the boyfriend-whom she's wanted all along-and yet, she's lost her friends. What a sacrifice.
Surely it won't end this way, though. Things have got to look up for Nat in the future, right? Well, I'll be eagerly awaiting your next installment. Bravo again on another brilliant chapter! :)