for Lies of the Heart6/2/2005 c16 gandella raye
didn't feel like signing in... GE-HEEZ. poor natalie.. her lies are all catching up with her **tisk tisk **
didn't feel like signing in... GE-HEEZ. poor natalie.. her lies are all catching up with her **tisk tisk **
5/29/2005 c16 
6TruthSpeaker
Wow, this is quite the cliff hanger. I'm anxious to see what your characters do next. I love your writing style. Keep up the good work!
6TruthSpeakerWow, this is quite the cliff hanger. I'm anxious to see what your characters do next. I love your writing style. Keep up the good work!
5/25/2005 c16 6beth is chill
Hey.. I'm a new reader and I must say... I'm so totally additcted to these stories. I don't really like Jeremy but that's probabbly just b/c i like Matt alot!
6beth is chillHey.. I'm a new reader and I must say... I'm so totally additcted to these stories. I don't really like Jeremy but that's probabbly just b/c i like Matt alot!
5/25/2005 c16 4shadowdreamer7598
good chapter, but the writing and plot line are beginning to get a little dry. maybe you could make it a bit less cliche to spice things up. write soon
4shadowdreamer7598good chapter, but the writing and plot line are beginning to get a little dry. maybe you could make it a bit less cliche to spice things up. write soon
5/25/2005 c16 2BlackPanther02
no. *crycrycry* this was an incredibly depressing chapter. she likes matt! yayayayayay! if sam and her don't make up, i will have to assassinate you. all for now. update sometime in the near future please!~Panther
2BlackPanther02no. *crycrycry* this was an incredibly depressing chapter. she likes matt! yayayayayay! if sam and her don't make up, i will have to assassinate you. all for now. update sometime in the near future please!~Panther
5/24/2005 c16 2chapsticklips
Ohh! No! Yeah, I think Natalie's lost it dude. Poor old Sam, and Matt, I think they both deserve better, but yeah, I hope everything gets resolved soon, and Matt and Nat become a little more than friends if you know what I mean. he he he. And yeah! But, although Natalie is deranged at the moment, this is a great story and I can't wait for more! ~Bree
2chapsticklipsOhh! No! Yeah, I think Natalie's lost it dude. Poor old Sam, and Matt, I think they both deserve better, but yeah, I hope everything gets resolved soon, and Matt and Nat become a little more than friends if you know what I mean. he he he. And yeah! But, although Natalie is deranged at the moment, this is a great story and I can't wait for more! ~Bree
5/24/2005 c14 Shez
gr8 chapter, but i beg ur creative genius to not keep natalie and jeremy together, coz matt is much sweeter!
gr8 chapter, but i beg ur creative genius to not keep natalie and jeremy together, coz matt is much sweeter!
5/24/2005 c8 Shez
im luvin the story, im pridicting that Nalaie should really get with matt.ok now im gonna read on and see if my pridiction will come out right
im luvin the story, im pridicting that Nalaie should really get with matt.ok now im gonna read on and see if my pridiction will come out right
5/23/2005 c16 2CynicInLove
ouch. *wince* she deserved it though. no matter how much she tried to justify it in her mind, she definitely deserved it. now she's second guessing her feelings for jeremy so all that using of her friends was for nothing. hmm, what one does for love. or the perception of it anyways. so, please update sooN!
2CynicInLoveouch. *wince* she deserved it though. no matter how much she tried to justify it in her mind, she definitely deserved it. now she's second guessing her feelings for jeremy so all that using of her friends was for nothing. hmm, what one does for love. or the perception of it anyways. so, please update sooN!
5/23/2005 c16 that-is-so-barbie
Aw... Poor Natalie. Where is Matt when you need him, gosh darn it? Oh, wait... He would make things worse... But he and Natalie have just got to get together in the end! =D
Aw... Poor Natalie. Where is Matt when you need him, gosh darn it? Oh, wait... He would make things worse... But he and Natalie have just got to get together in the end! =D
5/23/2005 c3 1neely0hara
wow i am in love with this story so far. I can definitley relate...and im sure alot of other people can too...i love it.
1neely0harawow i am in love with this story so far. I can definitley relate...and im sure alot of other people can too...i love it.
5/23/2005 c16 1bummertime
Thats sad. Whats up with people going on other peoples room and looking at their stuff? How rude. Good chappie tho!~Sugpup ^.-
1bummertimeThats sad. Whats up with people going on other peoples room and looking at their stuff? How rude. Good chappie tho!~Sugpup ^.-
5/23/2005 c1 1J. Cunningham
I. LOVE. THIS. STORY. (Im not quite done yet, but I think it's really something.) Let me just say that you deserve more than 234 reviews. You should have, like, 50! Keep up the good work! =)
Much Love,Jayleen Cunningham,, *
1J. CunninghamI. LOVE. THIS. STORY. (Im not quite done yet, but I think it's really something.) Let me just say that you deserve more than 234 reviews. You should have, like, 50! Keep up the good work! =)
Much Love,Jayleen Cunningham,, *