
10/2/2010 c3 Dreamer caster
keep going! i wanna see where this story goes=D its really good so far XD
keep going! i wanna see where this story goes=D its really good so far XD
6/1/2007 c3
1Enaid
haha elwyn. he cracks me up. i picture him as the crazy old really smart type. luvin this story hope you keep it up!

haha elwyn. he cracks me up. i picture him as the crazy old really smart type. luvin this story hope you keep it up!
6/1/2007 c2 Enaid
this is so cool i want to see whats in the dark grey area! and the little sister in chap. 1 seemed cool=)
this is so cool i want to see whats in the dark grey area! and the little sister in chap. 1 seemed cool=)
5/7/2006 c1 MB
Haveran's awesome! :) Excited to read onwards!
Haveran's awesome! :) Excited to read onwards!
10/15/2005 c3 Solanaceae
Even though you said you haven't planned for this story, it's really interesting and intriguing. You have to finish this sometime before you die, or I'll hunt you down and...bring you back to life? Finishing it is the only improvement I can suggest!
Even though you said you haven't planned for this story, it's really interesting and intriguing. You have to finish this sometime before you die, or I'll hunt you down and...bring you back to life? Finishing it is the only improvement I can suggest!
1/12/2005 c3 chinnease96
this is so good and really funny too! im sad u havent written anymore. this is realy good and if u decide to write the rest, ill be really happy! haha, ta-ta!
this is so good and really funny too! im sad u havent written anymore. this is realy good and if u decide to write the rest, ill be really happy! haha, ta-ta!
10/14/2004 c1 Salt and Vinegar Pringles
Oh! This is fascinating...a bridge? She made a bridge out of nothing! That's excellent. ANd she made stuff move, that was even cooler. Terrific!
Oh! This is fascinating...a bridge? She made a bridge out of nothing! That's excellent. ANd she made stuff move, that was even cooler. Terrific!
7/12/2004 c3
3MadMaverick
Severely cool! I like the story of Tara Price, it's fairly creepy. Can't wait to see what happens next

Severely cool! I like the story of Tara Price, it's fairly creepy. Can't wait to see what happens next
7/3/2004 c3 Decrescendo
Lol. Very interesting... Shianne and Damon are awesome, and I like Auri's attitude towards the whole supernatural thing. I loved the ending to this chapter. Hope you update soon!
Lol. Very interesting... Shianne and Damon are awesome, and I like Auri's attitude towards the whole supernatural thing. I loved the ending to this chapter. Hope you update soon!
6/6/2004 c3 Shelby
Hey JadeWing I read your fanfics and your trilogy, so why don't you get back to work on this masterpiece for a while please?
Hey JadeWing I read your fanfics and your trilogy, so why don't you get back to work on this masterpiece for a while please?