for Manda Rider 1: Friends and Enemies12/22/2003 c11 
7Lightness
ya know, this is a very nice mystery. youve done a wonderful job of releasing the right amount of evidence throughout the story so that the plot keeps thickening and the reader is left to wonder who the real culprit is.
im really enjoying this lots. yep yep. ^_^.
7Lightnessya know, this is a very nice mystery. youve done a wonderful job of releasing the right amount of evidence throughout the story so that the plot keeps thickening and the reader is left to wonder who the real culprit is.
im really enjoying this lots. yep yep. ^_^.
12/22/2003 c10 Lightness
that byron kid went a little crazy there... with his outburst and change in personality and such. that was weord.
that byron kid went a little crazy there... with his outburst and change in personality and such. that was weord.
12/21/2003 c2 Lightness
that whole hinting-about-pearl's dad's death-without-really explaining got a little confusing but thats okay.
i like your transitions into flashbacks and such. they flow really well. anywayz. im liking your story. ill come back for more later. bye now.
that whole hinting-about-pearl's dad's death-without-really explaining got a little confusing but thats okay.
i like your transitions into flashbacks and such. they flow really well. anywayz. im liking your story. ill come back for more later. bye now.
12/21/2003 c1 Lightness
heeya,
this is a great start. youve got good details and character development. interesting plot. all good stuff.
im going to keep reading now.
heeya,
this is a great start. youve got good details and character development. interesting plot. all good stuff.
im going to keep reading now.
8/20/2003 c27 Liyah-chan
Hi!^_^ I really love this story!
You did a great job! It was funny,cute,interesting,had a little romance,and it was a mystery.What more could you ask for.
Well I can't wait till the aequel!
You are making a sequel right? You just have to! I love this story! I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more!
lol I just love this story a lot!
BuhBye ^_~
Hi!^_^ I really love this story!
You did a great job! It was funny,cute,interesting,had a little romance,and it was a mystery.What more could you ask for.
Well I can't wait till the aequel!
You are making a sequel right? You just have to! I love this story! I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more!
lol I just love this story a lot!
BuhBye ^_~
8/16/2003 c1 1ResidentCarrot
Very intriguing so far! I like the character development and the plot looks like it's going to take off strongly. A good read!
1ResidentCarrotVery intriguing so far! I like the character development and the plot looks like it's going to take off strongly. A good read!
7/28/2003 c27 tzncz
Really really good. Don't know what else to say. Manda's my favourite character, then it would be Michael. Really good storyline. Keep writing!
Really really good. Don't know what else to say. Manda's my favourite character, then it would be Michael. Really good storyline. Keep writing!
7/28/2003 c11 tzncz
More clues! Wow. This story must've taken you ages to write. It's so well planned out! Keep writing!
More clues! Wow. This story must've taken you ages to write. It's so well planned out! Keep writing!
7/28/2003 c5 tzncz
That was funny. The story is getting somewhere now. They're on their way! Keep writing!
That was funny. The story is getting somewhere now. They're on their way! Keep writing!