6/9/2003 c9 lostinscotland
good chapter, and once again, my eyes are getting fuzzy. dratted computer screens! i be back later
good chapter, and once again, my eyes are getting fuzzy. dratted computer screens! i be back later
6/9/2003 c8 lostinscotland
fun, fun. next chapter!
oh, and i updated "Targeting innocents" if you're interested...
fun, fun. next chapter!
oh, and i updated "Targeting innocents" if you're interested...
6/7/2003 c7 lostinscotland
great belin...why shouldn't she trust michael? this story is really insane. but then, most mysteries are. good work.
i will read more when i get more time, after i finish this dumb term paper, and my math. then i have the summer fre! heh. this is a long story, wish i could curl up on the couch and read it...reading computer screens is harder. so it may take longer to read this than a normal story. but don't worry, i will finish!
great belin...why shouldn't she trust michael? this story is really insane. but then, most mysteries are. good work.
i will read more when i get more time, after i finish this dumb term paper, and my math. then i have the summer fre! heh. this is a long story, wish i could curl up on the couch and read it...reading computer screens is harder. so it may take longer to read this than a normal story. but don't worry, i will finish!
6/7/2003 c6 lostinscotland
evil! evil, evil, evil. ::storms around, wanting to beat up the evil guys, but knowing they're a lot bigger than she is::
evil people! i like michael! on to chapter 7!
evil! evil, evil, evil. ::storms around, wanting to beat up the evil guys, but knowing they're a lot bigger than she is::
evil people! i like michael! on to chapter 7!
6/3/2003 c27 2Mystified
When I first saw how long this was, I figured there was no way I could stand to read it all at once, but after the first couple chapters, I was totally hooked. I love Manda's and Michael's contrasting personalities -they just seem to fit perfectly. You wrote the action scenes really well, and you added just the right about to keep the story from dragging. (Poor Manda, though... everyone's out to get her. But I think it's great how she stands up for herself. Girls need to spend more time hitting guys. Hehe.)
This was fabulous, and I'm so excited at the prospect of a series with those two. I'd definitely read it. I know I had loads more to say about this, but my mind has gone blank and I figure this review is long enough. Once more: Excellent story!
When I first saw how long this was, I figured there was no way I could stand to read it all at once, but after the first couple chapters, I was totally hooked. I love Manda's and Michael's contrasting personalities -they just seem to fit perfectly. You wrote the action scenes really well, and you added just the right about to keep the story from dragging. (Poor Manda, though... everyone's out to get her. But I think it's great how she stands up for herself. Girls need to spend more time hitting guys. Hehe.)
This was fabulous, and I'm so excited at the prospect of a series with those two. I'd definitely read it. I know I had loads more to say about this, but my mind has gone blank and I figure this review is long enough. Once more: Excellent story!
5/27/2003 c5 Brooke O'Riley
still very intriguing!
and, well, i still like michael, but he's not quite like trent. hehe, he's sneaky! very sneaky...
as for my story, thanks for reveiwing! i know i'm mean to kayleigh, but her life will be better soon. i promise ;)
well, i will be back to read more chapters soon, but once again, my head isn't working. dreadfully annoying...
still very intriguing!
and, well, i still like michael, but he's not quite like trent. hehe, he's sneaky! very sneaky...
as for my story, thanks for reveiwing! i know i'm mean to kayleigh, but her life will be better soon. i promise ;)
well, i will be back to read more chapters soon, but once again, my head isn't working. dreadfully annoying...
5/26/2003 c4 lostinscotland
very, very interesting. i will come back and read more later, when i'm not falling asleep.
very, very interesting. i will come back and read more later, when i'm not falling asleep.
5/26/2003 c2 lostinscotland
wow, interesting. i like this michael kid! he's cool. kinda like my trent...hehe. 'cept trent didn't go to college...
um, wanted to let you know i've updated some stuff, in case you're interested. and now i'm gonna go read your next chapter
wow, interesting. i like this michael kid! he's cool. kinda like my trent...hehe. 'cept trent didn't go to college...
um, wanted to let you know i've updated some stuff, in case you're interested. and now i'm gonna go read your next chapter
5/23/2003 c27 L.R. Bancroft
Of course I'll be lookin' forward to your next story! You've got me hooked, man!
Of course I'll be lookin' forward to your next story! You've got me hooked, man!
5/22/2003 c27 2sahnetorte
Congrats on completing your first fic! I like it when you update lots of chapters in one day. It makes it easier to follow the story.
Definitely couldn't wait for your next one!
Congrats on completing your first fic! I like it when you update lots of chapters in one day. It makes it easier to follow the story.
Definitely couldn't wait for your next one!
5/21/2003 c27 13Faded Soulfire
This was such an interesting story. And I look forward to the rest of them. It was a nice ending and I can't wait to see what you have instore for the next few or how ever many there are. Don't forget that this was one of my favorites.
Much Love, Faded Soulfire
This was such an interesting story. And I look forward to the rest of them. It was a nice ending and I can't wait to see what you have instore for the next few or how ever many there are. Don't forget that this was one of my favorites.
Much Love, Faded Soulfire
5/20/2003 c26 2sahnetorte
Oh, man, you really have to leave it like that, don't you? :)
Lots of twists and action! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Oh, man, you really have to leave it like that, don't you? :)
Lots of twists and action! Can't wait for the next chapter!
5/20/2003 c26 Faded Soulfire
more soon, please? it had to be a cliff hanger. i hope i can wait until you update. plz plz plz put more chapters up soon. i really like this story.
Much Love, FS
more soon, please? it had to be a cliff hanger. i hope i can wait until you update. plz plz plz put more chapters up soon. i really like this story.
Much Love, FS
5/16/2003 c22 sahnetorte
Hi, aren't you the same one that wrote HB fanfic? I recognized your email addy. Nice to see you posting a story here.
As usual, great mystery! Can't wait for more.
Hi, aren't you the same one that wrote HB fanfic? I recognized your email addy. Nice to see you posting a story here.
As usual, great mystery! Can't wait for more.