6/24/2003 c1 196Damaged
I love how you wrote this. It starts out with a broken heart, and then ends with with "nothing but contempt from me". That was powerful! Keep writing!

5/6/2003 c1 11DeeTzy
Only a true friend of yours would know what this was about. Luckily for you I am that friend...

I really like the way the style changes as it gets to the end..it was more dramatic somehow. It was kinda like a song :)

-Dee