
5/31/2003 c1
285KittenX
wow, really thrilling, even though its pretty long, it keeps a reader on the edge wanting for more hehe, i liked this one!

wow, really thrilling, even though its pretty long, it keeps a reader on the edge wanting for more hehe, i liked this one!
5/31/2003 c1 bee
I know how it is, struggling to be happy and yet not succeding...
I know how it is, struggling to be happy and yet not succeding...
5/8/2003 c1 obsessive
i like it. its kind of like an emotional awakening. and its an interesting and powerful idea of what keeps the world running.
i like it. its kind of like an emotional awakening. and its an interesting and powerful idea of what keeps the world running.
5/6/2003 c1
12Mindless MadHatter
oh... real nice. I like the different word choice and transitions! COOlies!

oh... real nice. I like the different word choice and transitions! COOlies!