for Me, Myself, and I8/11/2003 c1 
8Alio Laski
Poor Liam! I hope I don't end up like that.. *as the last spaghetti-O falls to the floor..*noo.. *sigh* Really good story/play, though. I like how you made Ayden and Aubrey kinda like his shoulder-guys.. Nice job. You really caught the insanity of hearing voices O_o
~TBH (unincorporated)
8Alio LaskiPoor Liam! I hope I don't end up like that.. *as the last spaghetti-O falls to the floor..*noo.. *sigh* Really good story/play, though. I like how you made Ayden and Aubrey kinda like his shoulder-guys.. Nice job. You really caught the insanity of hearing voices O_o
~TBH (unincorporated)
7/27/2003 c1 5Luddite
Good play, it needs a bit of editing in some areas, but very interesting and gripping. You must of studied mental disorders. You have a very interesting look on the Schizoaffective Disorder. I like how your have split Liam's mind into two and have them represented with Ayden and Aubrey. Very good! Keep up the good work!
5LudditeGood play, it needs a bit of editing in some areas, but very interesting and gripping. You must of studied mental disorders. You have a very interesting look on the Schizoaffective Disorder. I like how your have split Liam's mind into two and have them represented with Ayden and Aubrey. Very good! Keep up the good work!
6/12/2003 c1 13Conteuse Vivante
Interesting...Is this a one shot? If so the ending is a bit of a cliffhanger. The idea is good and presentation is quite vivid. Good job.
13Conteuse VivanteInteresting...Is this a one shot? If so the ending is a bit of a cliffhanger. The idea is good and presentation is quite vivid. Good job.