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7/3/2003 c1 127godawful teen-angst poetry
heh. cute. I like it.
5/22/2003 c1 42Dream Angel
Very nice poem! It's very rare that I like acrostic poems, often because very rarely they're done so well. Often they sound forced, but yours did not sound like that at all. I must say I was surprised with the language in this poem. It was absolutely magnificent! I'm so used to writing being so poor on this site. Thanks for writing such a nice piece!
5/16/2003 c1 28ChaoxAngel
It's a pleasure to read your writings, they are so well done... :o)

~DW
5/14/2003 c1 35aurias
Very good, but the last two sounds like waking up to me. Nonetheless, it's very good.
5/12/2003 c1 36obsidian katana
awesome poem! great imagery, wonderfully described, your words really flow. good job! keep on writing!
5/12/2003 c1 34Children of the Root
I do welcome sleep and the chance to let go of reality for a few hours each night. Awesome Job!
5/7/2003 c1 8Alio Laski
^:^ cute. (I'm MJ's younger sister, by the way ^^) I like acrostics. And sleep. Really good~! Keep writing ^^

~TBH (unincorporated)
5/6/2003 c1 15Isay
Very pretty! The fourth line, 'evanescent images' reminds me of the band 'Evanescence'... I love their songs! ^_^

~Isay
5/6/2003 c1 100Keep it 100
Sounds like the real thing.

~Heart of the Sword

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