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8/13/2003 c1 Psychotic Cheeto
So true, I like it a lot.
7/28/2003 c1 tzncz
Brilliant. No more to say. Keep writing!
7/26/2003 c1 10Zarancids
You sound like a necrophilac. No j/k. I agree with there dude.
6/10/2003 c1 37Squeaks the Jester
Excellent topic. (has a tree-fetish of late) but I think the last line is a tad bit contridictory.

"I would want to be a tree,

That simply would just not be me."

But maybe you want to be something that's not like you?

Beyond the ending, it was an excellent poem and an interesting metaphor. Though I personally think bring a tree would be fun. :-D keep up the cool poems.
6/7/2003 c1 9Faithless13
cool..

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