for Stop It!1/30/2005 c1 Arcadia Lynch
Wow Tis poem is powerful, especially towards the end. I like it because its so weird.
Please Review me too *wink*
Wow Tis poem is powerful, especially towards the end. I like it because its so weird.
Please Review me too *wink*
1/29/2005 c1 
190apromptedpoet
Wow Ian..
I remember this happened with my father and I too. And it was about smoking also. That's kind of creepy.
Now, on to actually REVIEWING this.
I think it's really good. Not one of your better poems but I think it's great all the same. I could feel your anger while I was reading it and that's good. You're expressing very well.
Again, I think it's a great poem. You expressed a lot of how I feel about my dad.
Good job. Really spoke to me.
Much of Love-Suicidal_Greeting
P.S. I'm really glad you liked my poem. Oh and by the way, I would never not give you credit, because I know you wrote that poem but I just loved it so much! ^_^ But anyway. I'm honoured that you thought it was worth reviewing!
190apromptedpoetWow Ian..
I remember this happened with my father and I too. And it was about smoking also. That's kind of creepy.
Now, on to actually REVIEWING this.
I think it's really good. Not one of your better poems but I think it's great all the same. I could feel your anger while I was reading it and that's good. You're expressing very well.
Again, I think it's a great poem. You expressed a lot of how I feel about my dad.
Good job. Really spoke to me.
Much of Love-Suicidal_Greeting
P.S. I'm really glad you liked my poem. Oh and by the way, I would never not give you credit, because I know you wrote that poem but I just loved it so much! ^_^ But anyway. I'm honoured that you thought it was worth reviewing!