for Once upon a time5/18/2014 c7 
1leavesfallingup
If Caleb is so famous, why haven't any paparazzi shown up yet? A 17 year old girl would make quite a scandal.
1leavesfallingupIf Caleb is so famous, why haven't any paparazzi shown up yet? A 17 year old girl would make quite a scandal.
12/17/2013 c8 leavesfallingup
You keep throwing in these ominous sentences right in the middle of happy moments. You seem to enjoy cat & mouse too much, oh cruel and heartless author you.
You keep throwing in these ominous sentences right in the middle of happy moments. You seem to enjoy cat & mouse too much, oh cruel and heartless author you.
7/20/2011 c27 witeaya
the things i love about this story:
1. the plot
2. the characters and their smooth developments
3. it's pace
the things i love about this story:
1. the plot
2. the characters and their smooth developments
3. it's pace
7/10/2009 c27 buznuz1
THIS STORY ROX! i read it while sick for 2 days and have loved every minute of it (lol btw i found ur story through the favourites of an author who wrote a VERY similar story called, 'living with trey duvall') THIS STORY ROX! UR A REALLY TALENTED WRITER!PLZ CONTINUE TO WRITE!
THIS STORY ROX! i read it while sick for 2 days and have loved every minute of it (lol btw i found ur story through the favourites of an author who wrote a VERY similar story called, 'living with trey duvall') THIS STORY ROX! UR A REALLY TALENTED WRITER!PLZ CONTINUE TO WRITE!
12/23/2007 c27 Lisa
I really enjoyed your story! I was randomly going through Fictionpress after not looking on here in so long and happened to stumble across your story. I couldn't tear myself away from it. I loved how the characters developed and I was able to get such a visual in my head of what you were describing! Now I realize its been quite some time since you wrote this and all, however, I was curious if you ever did write a sequel to this story? If so I would love to read it some day :) If there is not one, I think the way you left it was well put, and like the girl I am, I gave a soft sigh at the end hahahaha. I hope that throughout this time between writing this story and now that you have continued to write because you honestly do have a talent. Anyhoo, now that I've rambled on quite enough, I'll leave you be hahaha. I hope everything has gone well with you and I hope that you continue to write, I look forward to reading more of your stuff in the future
I really enjoyed your story! I was randomly going through Fictionpress after not looking on here in so long and happened to stumble across your story. I couldn't tear myself away from it. I loved how the characters developed and I was able to get such a visual in my head of what you were describing! Now I realize its been quite some time since you wrote this and all, however, I was curious if you ever did write a sequel to this story? If so I would love to read it some day :) If there is not one, I think the way you left it was well put, and like the girl I am, I gave a soft sigh at the end hahahaha. I hope that throughout this time between writing this story and now that you have continued to write because you honestly do have a talent. Anyhoo, now that I've rambled on quite enough, I'll leave you be hahaha. I hope everything has gone well with you and I hope that you continue to write, I look forward to reading more of your stuff in the future
10/8/2007 c27 ophelia
aw...a lil too sapy for me but still okay
aw...a lil too sapy for me but still okay
8/10/2007 c15 MeiLeeCalifornia
Oh, dramatic music... can't wait for next chapter! (but losing computer access in one min, so will have to...)
Oh, dramatic music... can't wait for next chapter! (but losing computer access in one min, so will have to...)