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7/21/2003 c1 3Cry Tears of Darkness
well said... good job n keep writing
5/16/2003 c1 38Shadafakup
I dont know what u mean by advice.. Anyway, I liked the part about memories.. but perhaps u could have elaborated more..
5/8/2003 c1 169Siberia82
This is just a suggestion, but I think you should be less literal with your words and focus more on imagery. I believe this will improve your poem.

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