for Misfits8/4/2003 c2 
18The Fallen Caryatid
Wow...oh, wow. This is a terrific story. Jinx was my favorite character in that other story, but this one is so much better. Your writing is fantastic. Please have more.
18The Fallen CaryatidWow...oh, wow. This is a terrific story. Jinx was my favorite character in that other story, but this one is so much better. Your writing is fantastic. Please have more.
6/24/2003 c1 TAG1
You know I am going to hit you if you don't post more soon... right?
You know I am going to hit you if you don't post more soon... right?
5/14/2003 c2 TAG
Too lazy to log in, you know who it is anyway!
Well I like it. You over use the word aesthetic about 15 times. Fine once or twice... but you really need to cull a few.
Also you should NEVER use passive voice to open a story. ERK! The rest is good. Good to see you are writing more.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
PS: What you did to Ashley was unusually cruel. Made my gut twist because it was so... real and didn't scream sob story. Contrats.
Too lazy to log in, you know who it is anyway!
Well I like it. You over use the word aesthetic about 15 times. Fine once or twice... but you really need to cull a few.
Also you should NEVER use passive voice to open a story. ERK! The rest is good. Good to see you are writing more.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
PS: What you did to Ashley was unusually cruel. Made my gut twist because it was so... real and didn't scream sob story. Contrats.
5/11/2003 c1 4jinchuu
awh.. this stories awesome! i can't believe people haven't reveiwed this enough! if you would, could you email me when you update? ... thanks.
4jinchuuawh.. this stories awesome! i can't believe people haven't reveiwed this enough! if you would, could you email me when you update? ... thanks.
5/7/2003 c2 Grace
how the hell does someone as hypersensitive as Andrew/Jinx survive in the Army? very intrigued and eagerly awaiting more
how the hell does someone as hypersensitive as Andrew/Jinx survive in the Army? very intrigued and eagerly awaiting more