for The School Bus Trip From Hell5/8/2003 c1 
5Kathleen Grant
That was a bus ride from hell! Jeez, your poor friend... give 'im a hug for me! ^_^
~queen of the clarinets
5Kathleen GrantThat was a bus ride from hell! Jeez, your poor friend... give 'im a hug for me! ^_^
~queen of the clarinets
5/8/2003 c1 1Captain Vimes
The story is pretty good, however, I would suggest elaborating and not capitalizing every word.
Also, if you do elaborate, try to attach a more coherent storyline
1Captain VimesThe story is pretty good, however, I would suggest elaborating and not capitalizing every word.
Also, if you do elaborate, try to attach a more coherent storyline