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7/21/2003 c1 3Cry Tears of Darkness
very nice, i love the way you can create a type of story out of the poetry and it flows so nice and doesnt even rhyme! nice!
5/18/2003 c1 cold slitter
the majority of that poem is the story of my life (xept i use an exacto)

-wikked good
5/18/2003 c1 38Shadafakup
You express your emotions well in your poems.. This is no exception.. Good job.. Its interestin.. Though I feel there can be more, I enjoyed it lots..

I shouldnt be so critical.. Maybe its just my mood..

Anyway, great piece..
5/8/2003 c1 white shihirah
Violence, blood, sucide, what a nice poem...I can actually feel how you are feeling in this poem...and whatever is happening seemed so real...
5/8/2003 c1 cutelittledeadgirl
This poem is very sad. If you are going to cut please choose a place other than your wrist...

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