for Losing5/9/2003 c1 
39Kesshi Mashin
Another good poem. Very effectively conveys to the reader a sense of anguish and depression... I really do hope you feel better, and manage to pull yourself outta this funk. Again, nice poem. Keep on writin...
39Kesshi MashinAnother good poem. Very effectively conveys to the reader a sense of anguish and depression... I really do hope you feel better, and manage to pull yourself outta this funk. Again, nice poem. Keep on writin...
5/9/2003 c1 106cosmo-queen
This was an excellent poem and the message was powerful. It flowed really well too. I can relate to this, especially the lines "Would she still want to be my friend, knowing that I can't/Always be perfect, the way everyone thinks I am?" Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
106cosmo-queenThis was an excellent poem and the message was powerful. It flowed really well too. I can relate to this, especially the lines "Would she still want to be my friend, knowing that I can't/Always be perfect, the way everyone thinks I am?" Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*