for The Stolen Mind12/11/2003 c1 
16amethystdawn
Doesn't make any sense, and maybe that's why it's somewhat amusing. I kinda got grossed out on the first stanza, but I like the last and the 2nd one.
16amethystdawnDoesn't make any sense, and maybe that's why it's somewhat amusing. I kinda got grossed out on the first stanza, but I like the last and the 2nd one.
5/9/2003 c1 7Bela Lugosi
m did you actually write that? or by "parody" do you mean you took the poem and changed just some words in it. either way, its good.
7Bela Lugosim did you actually write that? or by "parody" do you mean you took the poem and changed just some words in it. either way, its good.
5/9/2003 c1 28thickwig
I haven't read the original but this... lol...
Do come away, say, where is my mind?
In the waters or was it the wild?
LOL, yes I'm laughing out Loud, I love those lines.. lol! Brilliant! I've to find the original now...
28thickwigI haven't read the original but this... lol...
Do come away, say, where is my mind?
In the waters or was it the wild?
LOL, yes I'm laughing out Loud, I love those lines.. lol! Brilliant! I've to find the original now...
5/9/2003 c1 22All Midnight Eyes
This is really good. I especially like the line "For I so love to hear a world weeping..."
22All Midnight EyesThis is really good. I especially like the line "For I so love to hear a world weeping..."