for Shula's little red riding hood7/15/2003 c1 PainKiller
This is very interesting. It's an original concept, and I did like your dialouge. I'd love to see you expand on this.
This is very interesting. It's an original concept, and I did like your dialouge. I'd love to see you expand on this.
6/14/2003 c1 badlywrittengirl
interesting indeed. i'd really like to see the classic fairy tale aspect come into play.
interesting indeed. i'd really like to see the classic fairy tale aspect come into play.
5/29/2003 c1 
38LoV3lee
I liked that. Very kool. The chapters were kinda confusing the way you hav them posted, mayb u can get that fixed. The story was great. I really like it so far. Things are prolly gona get interestin w/ the addition of this teacher of hers. I wana stay updated on this story, but i prolly cant review for awhile with finals comin up, but i will try 2 read more of ure stuff. Thanks for the review. and once again, good story.
38LoV3leeI liked that. Very kool. The chapters were kinda confusing the way you hav them posted, mayb u can get that fixed. The story was great. I really like it so far. Things are prolly gona get interestin w/ the addition of this teacher of hers. I wana stay updated on this story, but i prolly cant review for awhile with finals comin up, but i will try 2 read more of ure stuff. Thanks for the review. and once again, good story.