for In observance of a friend6/23/2003 c1 ME. UNBOUND AND UNCHAINED
aw.. babes! i loove you so much! how can someone so young produce poetry so old souled? *hugs* write more.. definetiley (what the hell is up with my spelling?)
aw.. babes! i loove you so much! how can someone so young produce poetry so old souled? *hugs* write more.. definetiley (what the hell is up with my spelling?)
5/17/2003 c1 
1Adia
I really like this... only long-lined poem I can remember actually liking. Nice job! :)
1AdiaI really like this... only long-lined poem I can remember actually liking. Nice job! :)
5/12/2003 c1 15BecomingMyself
Even though; warned your friend is the one to go through the hurt...be there to comfort!
I read all your work and the three poems are very nicely written in the free style I like very much; with passion and strong emotions.
Go on and write a lot more!
Great poetry!
15BecomingMyselfEven though; warned your friend is the one to go through the hurt...be there to comfort!
I read all your work and the three poems are very nicely written in the free style I like very much; with passion and strong emotions.
Go on and write a lot more!
Great poetry!
5/11/2003 c1 1aleppine
I love it!
Argh I hate you, my eyes are *stinging*. It must be my hayfever, or a speck of dust or something. Yeah, that's what it is.
How about me and you go out and bulldoze all the charming roses? '... windows of an abandoned house ...' I didn't think it was that bad. Did I tell you I love you?
You're going to hate my next poem, I know you are, cos it doesn't follow this advice ...
p.s. much as I loved this, next time I write a poem, pls write it about something other than a certain Italian.
x
1aleppineI love it!
Argh I hate you, my eyes are *stinging*. It must be my hayfever, or a speck of dust or something. Yeah, that's what it is.
How about me and you go out and bulldoze all the charming roses? '... windows of an abandoned house ...' I didn't think it was that bad. Did I tell you I love you?
You're going to hate my next poem, I know you are, cos it doesn't follow this advice ...
p.s. much as I loved this, next time I write a poem, pls write it about something other than a certain Italian.
x