9/6/2009 c1 11seraphofreverie
So...this story was stuck in my head ALL day, lol.
I love it. Honestly when I first saw it, I had my doubts, but, its really cute.
Even if it is a tragedy ;D
So...this story was stuck in my head ALL day, lol.
I love it. Honestly when I first saw it, I had my doubts, but, its really cute.
Even if it is a tragedy ;D
6/13/2003 c1 30Silverfire Starr
Oh my, this is definitely one of the most original poems I've ever read. You have great talent in making the poem flow.
Just on a point of interest, why do u capitalize every word? my apologies if any offense is taken.
Anyways, keep writing, this is great!
Oh my, this is definitely one of the most original poems I've ever read. You have great talent in making the poem flow.
Just on a point of interest, why do u capitalize every word? my apologies if any offense is taken.
Anyways, keep writing, this is great!
5/11/2003 c1 19Winterberry
It's interesting... heh. It isn't as eloquent or flowing as it could be, but the idea of becoming water is intriguing...
It's interesting... heh. It isn't as eloquent or flowing as it could be, but the idea of becoming water is intriguing...