for Memory of a Sunken City8/16/2008 c1 
1596NESSA
I really like how you worded this. I myself have read some about sunken city and stuff, but not a lot. I really like the first part f it. Keep up your writing, you have talent.
1596NESSAI really like how you worded this. I myself have read some about sunken city and stuff, but not a lot. I really like the first part f it. Keep up your writing, you have talent.
8/14/2004 c1 47Jazzie Kings
That was beautiful. The way you used different colors in your descriptions added more feeling and quite intensity to the poem.
It sound like a long lost world before the of man. One word: Beautiful
*^_^* Jazzie
47Jazzie KingsThat was beautiful. The way you used different colors in your descriptions added more feeling and quite intensity to the poem.
It sound like a long lost world before the of man. One word: Beautiful
*^_^* Jazzie
4/29/2004 c1 23Iseki
Pretty. Pretty is a simple word, but this is so very PRETTY. The discription is clear and the feelings are open. I think I could almost have your dream after reading this.
I like the last line, it leaves the imagination free to roam, and happy, and yet it's startling- it puts you off balance. It wakes you up. Prefectly Pretty.
23IsekiPretty. Pretty is a simple word, but this is so very PRETTY. The discription is clear and the feelings are open. I think I could almost have your dream after reading this.
I like the last line, it leaves the imagination free to roam, and happy, and yet it's startling- it puts you off balance. It wakes you up. Prefectly Pretty.
10/23/2003 c1 unforeseen
Wow. This far surpasses my mere poem on Atlantis. You seriously make my work look like it was written by a second grader. You. Rock. Really, you captured to moment and detail beautifully in this poem-not to metion the emotion put forth in the very end. When I read the last few stanzas, my spine quaked with shivers of ice cold shakes.
I congrats on your excellent peice.
-Euro-=-
Wow. This far surpasses my mere poem on Atlantis. You seriously make my work look like it was written by a second grader. You. Rock. Really, you captured to moment and detail beautifully in this poem-not to metion the emotion put forth in the very end. When I read the last few stanzas, my spine quaked with shivers of ice cold shakes.
I congrats on your excellent peice.
-Euro-=-
5/25/2003 c1 32eldrin
somehow this poem reaches right to my heart, i think you have quite a talent with words, your poems have a way of going staight to a persons soul.
32eldrinsomehow this poem reaches right to my heart, i think you have quite a talent with words, your poems have a way of going staight to a persons soul.
5/17/2003 c1 18Wrider
Remarkable. I absolutly loved this. It's wistful, and beautifully described.
"Cities now stand where forests fell." That was the part I especially liked. Great work!
18WriderRemarkable. I absolutly loved this. It's wistful, and beautifully described.
"Cities now stand where forests fell." That was the part I especially liked. Great work!
5/17/2003 c1 4GlacialStar
Incredibly unique, powerful choice of words. Wonderful piece of work!
Cheers,
Glacial*Star
4GlacialStarIncredibly unique, powerful choice of words. Wonderful piece of work!
Cheers,
Glacial*Star
5/13/2003 c1 36Psycho-kyugurl
This is great. It kinda reminded me of A.I. the movie when David when looking for the blue faerie and ya know the reat of it^^. It's lovely and I love it!
P.S. Another one worth up my fav. list!
36Psycho-kyugurlThis is great. It kinda reminded me of A.I. the movie when David when looking for the blue faerie and ya know the reat of it^^. It's lovely and I love it!
P.S. Another one worth up my fav. list!
5/13/2003 c1 53Artemis Astralstar
this is really beautiful, i love it, i see how after dreaming this you would feel an enormous attachment to it. speaking from experience, this is the best way to write poetry.
wonderful, well done, keep it up!
ps. this makes my favourites list!
53Artemis Astralstarthis is really beautiful, i love it, i see how after dreaming this you would feel an enormous attachment to it. speaking from experience, this is the best way to write poetry.
wonderful, well done, keep it up!
ps. this makes my favourites list!
5/12/2003 c1 73Exiled-Knight
that was absolutely beautiful. i love how you write, and you have an excellent way with words and emotions. Keep Writing
73Exiled-Knightthat was absolutely beautiful. i love how you write, and you have an excellent way with words and emotions. Keep Writing