for Cut9/18/2003 c1 Julia
howd u get that outta mulan? lola well i like it
*jules*
howd u get that outta mulan? lola well i like it
*jules*
7/1/2003 c1 
41StarFreak17
Wow... just wow... i can definetly relate. I really like the way these are done. Great job! definetly keep it up.
41StarFreak17Wow... just wow... i can definetly relate. I really like the way these are done. Great job! definetly keep it up.
5/22/2003 c1 Darkangel Rose
O.o O.o O.o O.o O.o O.o O.o
Wow. Charredrose, I'm speechless. You manage to take a subject everyone's written abotu and make it seem so new and interesting. I mean, I loved it so much. Especially the third one ... becuase it's so very realistic. Dunno ... this one just moved me.
O.o O.o O.o O.o O.o O.o O.o
Wow. Charredrose, I'm speechless. You manage to take a subject everyone's written abotu and make it seem so new and interesting. I mean, I loved it so much. Especially the third one ... becuase it's so very realistic. Dunno ... this one just moved me.
5/18/2003 c1 Abandoned Love
I really like this one! I don't know about how the Haiku works, so I won't comment on that part. It is a pretty poem on it's own.
I notice that you use the word "crimson" several times in your poetry (I was reading through them). You must really like that word! But, I suggest that you find other words that can subsitute for it. It will give your poetry a lot more variety if you don't re-use words as much. Well, that is all! I hope I helped.
-xoxo Molly
I really like this one! I don't know about how the Haiku works, so I won't comment on that part. It is a pretty poem on it's own.
I notice that you use the word "crimson" several times in your poetry (I was reading through them). You must really like that word! But, I suggest that you find other words that can subsitute for it. It will give your poetry a lot more variety if you don't re-use words as much. Well, that is all! I hope I helped.
-xoxo Molly
5/14/2003 c1 36Psycho-kyugurl
Why angst? I prefer humourous ones. But, a good job anyway. Princess Mulan would be proud.
36Psycho-kyugurlWhy angst? I prefer humourous ones. But, a good job anyway. Princess Mulan would be proud.
5/13/2003 c1 64not sure yet
o, scary, but pretty in its own way, i enjoyed it actually, good imagry for having a restraint such as syllables, and such, awesome job
64not sure yeto, scary, but pretty in its own way, i enjoyed it actually, good imagry for having a restraint such as syllables, and such, awesome job
5/13/2003 c1 Innocent's death
tear. poor K. like the backwards haiku style though, very nifty, don't like what you're saying much touhg...
tear. poor K. like the backwards haiku style though, very nifty, don't like what you're saying much touhg...
5/13/2003 c1 267Lady B.V Rose
On a scale of 1 - 10 for coolness that scores a 10 on my scale. Brill...blood... @_@ he he...
x Nicole x
267Lady B.V RoseOn a scale of 1 - 10 for coolness that scores a 10 on my scale. Brill...blood... @_@ he he...
x Nicole x