for Broken Wings4/13/2011 c1 brandon
loved the last bit x
loved the last bit x
12/18/2004 c1 
4black robin
"But you never were an angelJust a boy with broken wings"
that was my favorite part
4black robin"But you never were an angelJust a boy with broken wings"
that was my favorite part
10/12/2004 c1 aoi
WOW... This is cool. You are very good at writing poems :)
WOW... This is cool. You are very good at writing poems :)
2/28/2004 c1 8secretlovechild
This is amazing. It's excellently written. I especially love the last two lines "But you never were an angel, just a boy with broken wings".
8secretlovechildThis is amazing. It's excellently written. I especially love the last two lines "But you never were an angel, just a boy with broken wings".
2/17/2004 c1 35pixy-dizzy
wow...I really liked this. Especially the last verse. *sniffles* this was so great!
35pixy-dizzywow...I really liked this. Especially the last verse. *sniffles* this was so great!
10/6/2003 c1 67BeyondRepair
This is that song I'm going to read of yours so you can stop worrying about me pestering you, but I must say that this is the best song I ahve read so far. The first one that I read in which I went off on a long tangent about was good but this one is so much better simply because the way it flows. It is kinda short, I would have liked something a little longer, but thats only because it was so easy to read. The majority of lyrics you read you have to try and figure out the rhythm and even then you usually get it wrong, but with this song it practicly leaps off the page. As soon as I started reading it the flow just came to me. And the wording is so beautiful, and t repetion in it really makes it powerful. I loved this song and it is definately going in my favorites. Great stuff.
67BeyondRepairThis is that song I'm going to read of yours so you can stop worrying about me pestering you, but I must say that this is the best song I ahve read so far. The first one that I read in which I went off on a long tangent about was good but this one is so much better simply because the way it flows. It is kinda short, I would have liked something a little longer, but thats only because it was so easy to read. The majority of lyrics you read you have to try and figure out the rhythm and even then you usually get it wrong, but with this song it practicly leaps off the page. As soon as I started reading it the flow just came to me. And the wording is so beautiful, and t repetion in it really makes it powerful. I loved this song and it is definately going in my favorites. Great stuff.
5/21/2003 c1 11midnight dreams
*stops speechless for a moment* ...wow. i love it, *clicks the 'Add to favorite stories list'* Dang it, this is good. :D Read mine? heh...compared to this poem...my works should be at the dumpster. ^^
11midnight dreams*stops speechless for a moment* ...wow. i love it, *clicks the 'Add to favorite stories list'* Dang it, this is good. :D Read mine? heh...compared to this poem...my works should be at the dumpster. ^^
5/16/2003 c1 38Shadafakup
Sad.. But really beautiful.. Wow.. i liked it a lot.. Especially how u repeated the theme of looking for something.. The endi was great..
38ShadafakupSad.. But really beautiful.. Wow.. i liked it a lot.. Especially how u repeated the theme of looking for something.. The endi was great..
5/14/2003 c1 50Alequinn
Oh, but this is sad. This is really really sad. You manage to don this poem with a strong sense of sadness to it, it's hard not to share the lost and disappointment of the one who went searching for him. Very nicely written.
50AlequinnOh, but this is sad. This is really really sad. You manage to don this poem with a strong sense of sadness to it, it's hard not to share the lost and disappointment of the one who went searching for him. Very nicely written.
5/12/2003 c1 5Miss Spinn
That is very cute and excellently written! At the moment I can't think of anything wrong with it... but if I searched I probably could... I always can. ;-) Don't you hate me now...
5Miss SpinnThat is very cute and excellently written! At the moment I can't think of anything wrong with it... but if I searched I probably could... I always can. ;-) Don't you hate me now...