for The Hilarious Bus Trip5/14/2003 c1 
1Lauren K
This seems undirected. It didn't really make much sense to me, but maybe there's a backstory I need to know or something.
~Kiara
1Lauren KThis seems undirected. It didn't really make much sense to me, but maybe there's a backstory I need to know or something.
~Kiara
5/13/2003 c1 89Lyria Shard
lol, well tweaked. loved it, made me giggle...again. Bit of a weak ending, but you should SOO still turn this into a series.
Lyria
P.s. i love the "Cos he's a poofter." but, that made me laugh the hardest first time i heard it. Youre a comic genius at times dude.
89Lyria Shardlol, well tweaked. loved it, made me giggle...again. Bit of a weak ending, but you should SOO still turn this into a series.
Lyria
P.s. i love the "Cos he's a poofter." but, that made me laugh the hardest first time i heard it. Youre a comic genius at times dude.