for Struggle For Emancipation6/24/2003 c1 
196Damaged
I relate to this. It's hard to forget past incidents and just drop it, as if it never happened. It's hard to love when someone totally destroys your heart, ne? But, yeah.
This is absolutely BEAUTIFUL! Keep writing!
196DamagedI relate to this. It's hard to forget past incidents and just drop it, as if it never happened. It's hard to love when someone totally destroys your heart, ne? But, yeah.
This is absolutely BEAUTIFUL! Keep writing!
6/7/2003 c1 i am juxtaposed
i know this situation, unfortunately i couldn't let go and i lost him. yes i wanted freedom and your poem displays that.
i know this situation, unfortunately i couldn't let go and i lost him. yes i wanted freedom and your poem displays that.
6/3/2003 c1 SerAnonima
I LOVE THIS POEM SO SO MUCH! I CAN FEEL EVERY WORD YOU WROTE! THIS POEM SEEMS TO TALK TO ME. IT EXPRESSES SO MUCH OF WHAT I FEEL... WOW.. WOW...I TRULLY UNDERSTAND WHERE YOU ARE COMING FROM... WOW...SORRY...EXCELLENT POEM...TRUE.UNIQUE.POWERFUL.EMOTIONAL.PERFECT. GREAT.
I LOVE THIS POEM SO SO MUCH! I CAN FEEL EVERY WORD YOU WROTE! THIS POEM SEEMS TO TALK TO ME. IT EXPRESSES SO MUCH OF WHAT I FEEL... WOW.. WOW...I TRULLY UNDERSTAND WHERE YOU ARE COMING FROM... WOW...SORRY...EXCELLENT POEM...TRUE.UNIQUE.POWERFUL.EMOTIONAL.PERFECT. GREAT.
5/30/2003 c1 28tahayov
mm this poem is intresting..its out of rhyme but still i love its meanings and the way u write it.thanks for reviewing my day was going bad..hope u review my other stuff i want to know what u think about them
28tahayovmm this poem is intresting..its out of rhyme but still i love its meanings and the way u write it.thanks for reviewing my day was going bad..hope u review my other stuff i want to know what u think about them
5/20/2003 c1 8d7-Poet
This poem was both cute and um...can't think of the right word. I want to say liberating, but that's not quite it...oh well. I'll remember it in about two months and blurt it out in the middle of a conversation and then realize that I don't even know why I needed to know that word. Happens to me everyday. I think I'm growing dumber...
Anyway, great write. Time for some more reading!
8d7-PoetThis poem was both cute and um...can't think of the right word. I want to say liberating, but that's not quite it...oh well. I'll remember it in about two months and blurt it out in the middle of a conversation and then realize that I don't even know why I needed to know that word. Happens to me everyday. I think I'm growing dumber...
Anyway, great write. Time for some more reading!