12/17/2003 c1 Kalamity Kat
This poem always, ALWAYS shakes me to the core.
It's beautifully written, I especially like the last two lines of the first paragraph. They always leave a lasting impression on me, I don't know why. O.o
As all your work, simply breathtaking, very fluent, eloquent. Man, I keep repeating myself.
I love it and it's going on my faves.
-Kat

5/14/2003 c1 Thunk
Oh, Rae...

Man. See how you take a canker of your soul and turn it into something beautiful?

You couldn't have phrased that any better...especially those last two lines.

*shivers* There are few poems that I've read that have touched me so deeply.