for An Entity6/7/2005 c1 
59Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys
I LOVED THIS...perfectly written, i know exactly how the welcoming of death feels, adn the fear of it 2. Wow, great poem, going in my fav's it is ^_^ Great Job
59Sacred-Phoenix-NephthysI LOVED THIS...perfectly written, i know exactly how the welcoming of death feels, adn the fear of it 2. Wow, great poem, going in my fav's it is ^_^ Great Job
12/28/2003 c1 54Werecat99
I liked that. Maybe you thinks it's mediocre, but it certainly makes a point.
54Werecat99I liked that. Maybe you thinks it's mediocre, but it certainly makes a point.
5/17/2003 c1 34Smoky Bear
we've all wrote stuff tht we didn't think come out right... well i know i have :-) suppose its all part of the fun!
yup death is the great equalizer and all that... the only uncertain certaincy...
34Smoky Bearwe've all wrote stuff tht we didn't think come out right... well i know i have :-) suppose its all part of the fun!
yup death is the great equalizer and all that... the only uncertain certaincy...
5/15/2003 c1 Blackavar The Broken Bunny
It struck me as a deep, searching poem as i believe it is meant to be. i can see what you mean about it not coming out right as this seems only the skeleton of emotion, but it is good none the less.
It struck me as a deep, searching poem as i believe it is meant to be. i can see what you mean about it not coming out right as this seems only the skeleton of emotion, but it is good none the less.