
8/28/2011 c1
1Tivaau
This was amazing! I love your style of writing; the detail and description is truly wonderful. I cannot wait until you update!
Is this really your first HET? You definately made it sound like your 100th! You are very talented :)

This was amazing! I love your style of writing; the detail and description is truly wonderful. I cannot wait until you update!
Is this really your first HET? You definately made it sound like your 100th! You are very talented :)
4/10/2008 c1 Alicia
This is awesome...continue please!
This is awesome...continue please!
7/11/2003 c1
12IHJ
Interesting title, by the way. Course, since it's only the first chapter, we don't exactly know what it refers to. *grin* Yeah, it was good. What's "het"?) And we have to wonder if Sven knows James and his family history through personal means or if he heard "gossip" (tho as men they'd OF COURSE say they don't gossip like women!) which led him to be wary. Looking forward to reading more! Hope you don't overburden yourself with so many works of prose/poetry at the same time!

Interesting title, by the way. Course, since it's only the first chapter, we don't exactly know what it refers to. *grin* Yeah, it was good. What's "het"?) And we have to wonder if Sven knows James and his family history through personal means or if he heard "gossip" (tho as men they'd OF COURSE say they don't gossip like women!) which led him to be wary. Looking forward to reading more! Hope you don't overburden yourself with so many works of prose/poetry at the same time!
5/14/2003 c1
9Leaf Zelindor
your first het? it looks really good so far, you've got me interested in the story ~Leaf~

your first het? it looks really good so far, you've got me interested in the story ~Leaf~
5/14/2003 c1 rockstar117
Cool story idea so far. Great conversations. (And yes, it was good, but whats a het?) Good work!
Cool story idea so far. Great conversations. (And yes, it was good, but whats a het?) Good work!