for May All Praise Nature!6/15/2003 c1 
4JAM Yiska
You could make it an ode to flowers! :) Nice flow. I like the diction you used.
4JAM YiskaYou could make it an ode to flowers! :) Nice flow. I like the diction you used.
6/12/2003 c1 7the froggy ong
this is beautiful..i like it a lot... (really)...i can imagine what u said... very mesmerizingly beautiful...haha.. u r a good writer...ganbate ne!
ps:thanks for ur review..
Froggy San
7the froggy ongthis is beautiful..i like it a lot... (really)...i can imagine what u said... very mesmerizingly beautiful...haha.. u r a good writer...ganbate ne!
ps:thanks for ur review..
Froggy San
6/11/2003 c1 15fluffy gizmo
this is so vibrant! i could just see a garden of those flowers in my mind!
15fluffy gizmothis is so vibrant! i could just see a garden of those flowers in my mind!
6/7/2003 c4 106cosmo-queen
Another great poem. I love the way you characterise nature, it's just right. And thankyou for the kind reviews. Your nature poems are also very good and it's nice to know that there are people out there who do appreciate the beauty of the world. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
106cosmo-queenAnother great poem. I love the way you characterise nature, it's just right. And thankyou for the kind reviews. Your nature poems are also very good and it's nice to know that there are people out there who do appreciate the beauty of the world. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
5/15/2003 c2 cosmo-queen
I love storms. Your poem was very good, it was very descriptive. I loved it. I particularly liked "Falling, pouring/Tears from the sky." Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
I love storms. Your poem was very good, it was very descriptive. I loved it. I particularly liked "Falling, pouring/Tears from the sky." Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
5/15/2003 c1 cosmo-queen
I love nature too and I have to agree that the Flower Kingdom is most perfect. I believe too many people take nature for granted these days so it was very nice to read your poem. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
I love nature too and I have to agree that the Flower Kingdom is most perfect. I believe too many people take nature for granted these days so it was very nice to read your poem. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*