Reviews: Lightning | FictionPress

for Lightning

11/14/2003 c1

3hamsta-boi
Ahu? Hello? 16 words? hello so not worthy. you should upload the lot together! Much better that way.

8/11/2003 c1

7Dark Hamadryad
Lightening scares the crap out of me-mainly because it can kill...

~Luna

5/23/2003 c1

12Silverlight Elf
Wow, such a powerufl use of words in such a short amount of space.. very nice

5/17/2003 c1

76CoolBeans18s
Wonderful description!

~ COOlBeAns18s

5/16/2003 c1 Needa S
Bravo! Splendid job!

5/15/2003 c1

15Isay
Very descriptive... ^_^ I love the second line. The words were carefully chosen. I never thought that lightning 'crashed' through the clouds before. Very original!

~Isay

5/15/2003 c1

100Keep it 100
This was good. Lightning is indeed beautiful.

~Heart of the Sword