for Bonded Spirits8/12/2004 c1 frhgdfgsdgrfhrghbvfctrd tycfhg
Wow, long time, no read. I completely forgot about reading your other story (Dragon's Tear, I think). Sorry about that. I got causght up in writing and editing my own story. I wuld go back and finish read your other story, but it has been too long to remember what was going on and i am far to lazy to start back from the beginning.
Now that I have wasted this much space, it is time to actually get to the review.
Good opening chapter. It brings the reader in right away. There were some grammatical errors in there, but I figure other people will tell you about those, so I am just going to let them do it. I hope to here more from this story and you soon. Have a nice day.
Wow, long time, no read. I completely forgot about reading your other story (Dragon's Tear, I think). Sorry about that. I got causght up in writing and editing my own story. I wuld go back and finish read your other story, but it has been too long to remember what was going on and i am far to lazy to start back from the beginning.
Now that I have wasted this much space, it is time to actually get to the review.
Good opening chapter. It brings the reader in right away. There were some grammatical errors in there, but I figure other people will tell you about those, so I am just going to let them do it. I hope to here more from this story and you soon. Have a nice day.
6/3/2003 c1 Anony Nony
Hey, Maverick!
Nice writing. Or maybe it was a lovely painting, eh? Don't be discouraged by the shit and crap others say: Your work is awesome. Keep writing!
Hey, Maverick!
Nice writing. Or maybe it was a lovely painting, eh? Don't be discouraged by the shit and crap others say: Your work is awesome. Keep writing!
5/23/2003 c1 Anonymous
Are you out of your mind, woman? The Dragon's Tear is good, but this? This is crap! What happened to your touch? What happened to you? Are you crazy? Tell your Dragon's Angel to take you to the mental hospital! Then maybe you should write. Sheesh! Ew! Sickening! Get a brain, get a life, and then write!
Are you out of your mind, woman? The Dragon's Tear is good, but this? This is crap! What happened to your touch? What happened to you? Are you crazy? Tell your Dragon's Angel to take you to the mental hospital! Then maybe you should write. Sheesh! Ew! Sickening! Get a brain, get a life, and then write!
5/17/2003 c1 
1k+Faithless Juliet
That was hella good-no seriusly that was one of the best peices of writing that I've read on this site, great job.
1k+Faithless JulietThat was hella good-no seriusly that was one of the best peices of writing that I've read on this site, great job.
5/17/2003 c1 35Krikoris
Woah. That was short, yet totally sweet. The paragraphs are a little odd and you spelled darkness a bit odd in the beginning, but other than that, I just kept reading till the end. This is going on my Favorite's list. Maybe you could check out some of my stuff, sorry, shameless promotion...I truly do love this.
Krikoris
35KrikorisWoah. That was short, yet totally sweet. The paragraphs are a little odd and you spelled darkness a bit odd in the beginning, but other than that, I just kept reading till the end. This is going on my Favorite's list. Maybe you could check out some of my stuff, sorry, shameless promotion...I truly do love this.
Krikoris