
7/9/2003 c1
89Stoffpferd
This one is so beautifully written and simply true. "For you are a gift so precious to me" That line says it all. I love my mum with all my heart cause she's always there for me.
Great poem! I like it very much!
~Stoffpferd~

This one is so beautifully written and simply true. "For you are a gift so precious to me" That line says it all. I love my mum with all my heart cause she's always there for me.
Great poem! I like it very much!
~Stoffpferd~
6/15/2003 c1
128Zainab
Very beautiful. You have a good heart. I like this one with its rhyme. O yeah, I read the beginning of your profile: Japanese music is the best. (I also like French too...)

Very beautiful. You have a good heart. I like this one with its rhyme. O yeah, I read the beginning of your profile: Japanese music is the best. (I also like French too...)
6/14/2003 c1
200Ashes of a Willow
aaww! awesome poem. I love my mom! she's my everything, especially since my dad left (divorce)

aaww! awesome poem. I love my mom! she's my everything, especially since my dad left (divorce)
5/30/2003 c1
42Lady of the Moon
Wonderful! It expresses the duty we have to our mothers for helping us grow up quite well. In your first line I think you meant to say the palm of your hand. The phrasing you used was very awkward and I could not be quite sure what it was sposed to mean.
Asta Chantrea Orra

Wonderful! It expresses the duty we have to our mothers for helping us grow up quite well. In your first line I think you meant to say the palm of your hand. The phrasing you used was very awkward and I could not be quite sure what it was sposed to mean.
Asta Chantrea Orra
5/27/2003 c1 greenfroggies
Very touching - i totally agree. I don't know what I would do if i lost my mother. Just one point, in the line 'Of old fantasies never unmarred.' it has a double negative. Maybe you meant it to but i think it would work better if it said 'ever unmarred' or 'never marred'.
Loved the poem and will definately check out some of your other stuff.
Very touching - i totally agree. I don't know what I would do if i lost my mother. Just one point, in the line 'Of old fantasies never unmarred.' it has a double negative. Maybe you meant it to but i think it would work better if it said 'ever unmarred' or 'never marred'.
Loved the poem and will definately check out some of your other stuff.
5/22/2003 c1
4liquidcrystal
this is incredibly sweet. I'd love to write something like this for my mother. anyway... keep writing! :)

this is incredibly sweet. I'd love to write something like this for my mother. anyway... keep writing! :)
5/21/2003 c1
8glitterjewele
wow, that was stunning! so beautifully written . . . would make a wonderful mother's day card (write to hallmark, they could use a good one ;P). very touching, indeed. the last line, "oh mother without you, i am not me," was lovely - it gave me a little chill. :) my other favorite lines were "you lure sunshine into my life," and "you dabbed my world with brilliant hues." just gorgeous. kudos!

wow, that was stunning! so beautifully written . . . would make a wonderful mother's day card (write to hallmark, they could use a good one ;P). very touching, indeed. the last line, "oh mother without you, i am not me," was lovely - it gave me a little chill. :) my other favorite lines were "you lure sunshine into my life," and "you dabbed my world with brilliant hues." just gorgeous. kudos!
5/20/2003 c1 Needa S
This was beautiful! And your note is so true for everyday goes by I miss my mother. Excellent job!
This was beautiful! And your note is so true for everyday goes by I miss my mother. Excellent job!
5/19/2003 c1
74wonky donkey
Wow this was really good.
It makes me feel bad for the way I treat my mom.
I really like the lines"you lure sunshine into my life", "brim the world with love and care"
Great job!

Wow this was really good.
It makes me feel bad for the way I treat my mom.
I really like the lines"you lure sunshine into my life", "brim the world with love and care"
Great job!
5/18/2003 c1
36obsidian katana
awesome poem! very sweet, and a nice reminder we all need to have once in a while. nice job on this! keep on writing!

awesome poem! very sweet, and a nice reminder we all need to have once in a while. nice job on this! keep on writing!