for Souls Divided: Caliber Under Fire5/23/2003 c1 
17ArwenStar914
Hmm, I like, I like. Post more, and did you do anymore with the... oh crap, what was he? the lord dude with the part of the jewel... him. I like that part lots and lots, I wanna read it again. *grin* Okay, off to work on my own stories. **ArwenStar** (Oh, yea, I worked out the ending for The Unconquerable Spirit. It's... I'm not even sure. I write it out and let you tell me.)
17ArwenStar914Hmm, I like, I like. Post more, and did you do anymore with the... oh crap, what was he? the lord dude with the part of the jewel... him. I like that part lots and lots, I wanna read it again. *grin* Okay, off to work on my own stories. **ArwenStar** (Oh, yea, I worked out the ending for The Unconquerable Spirit. It's... I'm not even sure. I write it out and let you tell me.)
5/18/2003 c1 10DarkSorceress
Off to a pretty good start. It seems that you have encountered a spacing problem here, I suggest you double the amount of spacing that you had before, and then repost the chapter.
10DarkSorceressOff to a pretty good start. It seems that you have encountered a spacing problem here, I suggest you double the amount of spacing that you had before, and then repost the chapter.