for Forget And Remember, A Slave Must Do9/20/2003 c3 zagato
This is good but I'm still confused. What exactly did he tell the prince? I did not get it all. Please update.
This is good but I'm still confused. What exactly did he tell the prince? I did not get it all. Please update.
6/4/2003 c3 
2starzstruck-1
Absolutely bgeautimus! i love it! a lil bit of grammer/spelling check here and there would do no harm, but i love the story itself. It's so full of emotion, and it seems i can actually HEAR Sheba's thoughts! keep up the good work:)
2starzstruck-1Absolutely bgeautimus! i love it! a lil bit of grammer/spelling check here and there would do no harm, but i love the story itself. It's so full of emotion, and it seems i can actually HEAR Sheba's thoughts! keep up the good work:)
5/30/2003 c3 Nyamo the Great
o this is an interesting story. how old is that rokushan guy anyway? update soon!
~ Son Lin
o this is an interesting story. how old is that rokushan guy anyway? update soon!
~ Son Lin
5/29/2003 c3 3Jovia
O_o... wow... sorta like mine at first... but its so much better... i hate you... well not really but i always say that to someone who is better than me ^_^ keep up the good work. and i like the wolves of star thing... *wish she had cool ideas like that*
3JoviaO_o... wow... sorta like mine at first... but its so much better... i hate you... well not really but i always say that to someone who is better than me ^_^ keep up the good work. and i like the wolves of star thing... *wish she had cool ideas like that*
5/29/2003 c2 Jovia
coolios... continue please... this is so funny... and yes i get amusement from weird things so what?
coolios... continue please... this is so funny... and yes i get amusement from weird things so what?
5/28/2003 c1 Jovia
O_o... wow... my fic of slave was going to be somewhat like that... but i changed it because i could ^_^ anyways this is great. can't wait for the next chappy
O_o... wow... my fic of slave was going to be somewhat like that... but i changed it because i could ^_^ anyways this is great. can't wait for the next chappy
5/24/2003 c2 2starzstruck-1
thats pretty good! i love it... very interesting, and it is very easy to get addicted to, lol. I'm hoping you'll add more to it...
2starzstruck-1thats pretty good! i love it... very interesting, and it is very easy to get addicted to, lol. I'm hoping you'll add more to it...
5/23/2003 c2 NikkiLiz878
I really like this. I can't wait to see how it progresses, please update soon.
I really like this. I can't wait to see how it progresses, please update soon.
5/18/2003 c1 1Sweetvenom1
Nice, although there is only 1 chapter so I don't really know where you're going with it. I like slave fics too. you should read mine. (Shameless plug I know, but I think you might enjoy it)
Keep up the good work!
1Sweetvenom1Nice, although there is only 1 chapter so I don't really know where you're going with it. I like slave fics too. you should read mine. (Shameless plug I know, but I think you might enjoy it)
Keep up the good work!
5/18/2003 c1 shell
*eagerly waits for another chapter*
I liked it.
*eagerly waits for another chapter*
I liked it.
5/18/2003 c1 NikkiLiz878
Well, I'm sort of confused about this one, but I can't wait to see where it leads to. Keep up the good work. Update soon.
Well, I'm sort of confused about this one, but I can't wait to see where it leads to. Keep up the good work. Update soon.
5/18/2003 c1 10DarkSorceress
Off to a good start. This story could use a bit of slowing down, and some time set aside for character development. Right now, it doesnt make much sense at all. I think you need to slow down, and explain things, and this story will be a bit better.
10DarkSorceressOff to a good start. This story could use a bit of slowing down, and some time set aside for character development. Right now, it doesnt make much sense at all. I think you need to slow down, and explain things, and this story will be a bit better.
5/18/2003 c1 2starzstruck-1
v v v nice.. kinda rough characters, which always makes for a good story line.
2starzstruck-1v v v nice.. kinda rough characters, which always makes for a good story line.