
2/19/2005 c1
11arachibutyrophobia
o dear...totally busted...interesting story beginning...consitering you wrote this almost a year ago, is there any hope you'll continue this?
~birdytamel~

o dear...totally busted...interesting story beginning...consitering you wrote this almost a year ago, is there any hope you'll continue this?
~birdytamel~
1/29/2005 c1 Salt and Vinegar Pringles
I like your story. That's a good fact. Ciao!
I like your story. That's a good fact. Ciao!
12/29/2004 c1
2w1ngle55-ang3L
i love this story! its so.. so... funky! ahhaha yeah, i know, i gotsa improve my vocab, but i think ill leave that dictionary closed for a while, dontcha.. although im sure its uh, thrilling reading ! haha. yes, well, anywhoo, plz update soon ! this story has heapsa potential, and i loved the ending, and the way u write.. its cool ! :) yeah, ill prob keep repeating myself if i continue, coz ur story just rocks and theres pretty much no other way to say it :P keep writing!- w1ngle55 ang3L

i love this story! its so.. so... funky! ahhaha yeah, i know, i gotsa improve my vocab, but i think ill leave that dictionary closed for a while, dontcha.. although im sure its uh, thrilling reading ! haha. yes, well, anywhoo, plz update soon ! this story has heapsa potential, and i loved the ending, and the way u write.. its cool ! :) yeah, ill prob keep repeating myself if i continue, coz ur story just rocks and theres pretty much no other way to say it :P keep writing!- w1ngle55 ang3L
7/20/2004 c1
3anon11345
cool sotry, veri veri cool, lub it, hey me from Toronto too!
anyways, i think u should continue this story.
so ya BaBi . . . for now . . .

cool sotry, veri veri cool, lub it, hey me from Toronto too!
anyways, i think u should continue this story.
so ya BaBi . . . for now . . .
6/14/2004 c1
9Chione
Busted. Hehehehehehehehe that sucks.
Kinda sounds like me, actually. I always get caught.
So, anyway this is very entertaining, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Please please continue this. It's funny. Very funny. Teenage drama is always a good read.
And it's unusual teenage drama, to boot.

Busted. Hehehehehehehehe that sucks.
Kinda sounds like me, actually. I always get caught.
So, anyway this is very entertaining, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Please please continue this. It's funny. Very funny. Teenage drama is always a good read.
And it's unusual teenage drama, to boot.
10/22/2003 c1 capture21
cool fic, keep writing. luv it.
~capture21
cool fic, keep writing. luv it.
~capture21
10/19/2003 c1 Courteney
Hey, I love your story, you should update soon, it's been like 5 months already!
Hey, I love your story, you should update soon, it's been like 5 months already!
5/19/2003 c1 Jory
Gurrl! HII! i like where this story is goin, and i can totally relate to your chracter...and this cutie...you better be havin him in the story more! keep it up..im soo lovin it!
Gurrl! HII! i like where this story is goin, and i can totally relate to your chracter...and this cutie...you better be havin him in the story more! keep it up..im soo lovin it!
5/19/2003 c1 lolz
Nice style...
Nice way of depicting teen life too...
And it's BRITNEY not Brittany...
Nice style...
Nice way of depicting teen life too...
And it's BRITNEY not Brittany...