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2/14/2004 c1 34Forest Passant
that was kinda cool. i think a lot of music is like that. but why do you care if the boys in your county wear pink on a regular basis? that was in your bio. but anyway, cool poem.
11/24/2003 c1 8PJ Wise
Hm... I love Linkin Park.

Anyway, about this poem. Very insightful. Brevity is the soul of wit, as Shakespeare says. Keep it up.
10/10/2003 c1 tomatogreens
It made sense the first time I read it...why oh why did I read it again?

I'll tell you why: it's good. Confusing, yes, but quite good. Whether acid means acid as in drug or acid as in science class (this I doubt) or acid as in whatever the reader thinks it, it's good. I cannot think of synonyms today...
9/11/2003 c1 21Jaunty Pill
How do I change it without having to take it off the site for awhile? Im new at this and not very good with comuputers, could you explain how? Thanks.

- Jaunty
9/10/2003 c1 17Cianna Greenwood
I like it. Something different from what I usually come across on this site. ^_^ A pleasant change.

I'm resisting the incredible urge to be stupid, but I just know I'm going to be anyways. About your review for my poem, I didn't think the title thing was clever, in the least (amgoD). It was an attempt to come up with a bad name for a bad poem. It was the first poem I've written in months, and I wanted feedback. I got feedback, and I thank you for that. An honest opinion means a lot to me. Though I think you may like almost any of my other poems better. And if I haven't totally repulsed you, would you be interested in e-mailing me? (I must sound pathetic) . Yeah. I feel stupid... Scratch that, I am stupid. I just wasted your time by writing something entirely irrelevant to your poem.

And now that I have made myself seem an utter ass, my life's mission has been completed. Thank you for the review, and keep writing. You're good at it.
9/10/2003 c1 27Loganberry
Not a subject I know much about, but I liked it nevertheless, as it does rather well in getting across the mood. "Melting, melding" is particularly clever, I think.

The one real nit-pick would be the Linkin Park reference. I think it would have worked better had you left out the footnote, and simply let the reader work out the reference.
9/1/2003 c1 9Peg Pannery
When reading it, your never really sure what this poem is about. All it seems to show is emotions, but of who? It's good, but it could be better.
8/23/2003 c1 37handle187
Drums reach out and skip along your palpitation

A guide through a journey on the boat of hallucination

Quirky sound effects detail tribe colored gyration

Experiments in technologies, daring to redefine sensation
8/11/2003 c1 10Sweet Mistakes
I became lost after the first two syllables.

Listen, the poem is ok, despite the fact that it makes no sense. Your attempt at a poem that will make people feel things, grab their heart and etch a message into it failed incredibly.

And as you name says, I couldn't 'care less about you mean whisper[s]'.
8/5/2003 c1 13NuttyGummy
I have an idea as to what this is about but I'm probably wrong so I'll keep it to myself.

It was really good though.

Thanks for the review on my poem. And thank you for being honest. Honest reviewers are my favorite.
7/22/2003 c1 One With Moonlight
It's flashy, like all these images are flying by. It's a nice spin on the topic you're writing about. Nice.
7/16/2003 c1 22MoLay
I know I'm probably wrong...but it seems to me like this was about teen generation.
7/12/2003 c1 51content with rhyme
Interesting poem. Not sure what it is about, but it was good. :o)
7/9/2003 c1 1romanticvomitx
listen. i knowm im worth air to breath.so dont asume my feelings u bitch. i know what i write may make it look like i have problems. ive been to a mental instatution for suicide atempt. so what? i dont care. if i didnt die then...i know i have something to live for.

do u know what its like to cut ur wrists? no. so if u think u under stand how ppl like me feel...u are so wrong...

Ps. ur poem sucks. stop poising this site plz.
7/6/2003 c1 37Animagess
Very breathy and flashy; sounds just like it should. A few awkward lines and I'm not sure the 'Linkin Park' and the asterixs added anything to the poem *actually they were kinda distracting), but a decent poem with some good imagery and rhythm.
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