for Storms8/6/2003 c1 
6Black and Silver Dreamer
This describes how SO many people feel at times... I found one typo, evil things typos are... 'You see my friend is in love with me; could I feel he same for him?'
he=the
At least you don't do what I do I end up putting hte and people are just all confused.
Anyways, this is an awesome piece. I'm off to read more of your stuuf.!
6Black and Silver DreamerThis describes how SO many people feel at times... I found one typo, evil things typos are... 'You see my friend is in love with me; could I feel he same for him?'
he=the
At least you don't do what I do I end up putting hte and people are just all confused.
Anyways, this is an awesome piece. I'm off to read more of your stuuf.!
8/2/2003 c1 Indigo-Andie
i like your work alot. you have a disinctice style, truthful, and simple yet just as complicated as humans are, and oh boy! Aren't we complicated! anyway, you obviously love writing, and you should definitely keep it up!
- in writing you shall find solace, or shall you just find yourself?-
hey ur reviewing my stuff r u online? tell me if u reveiw again, ok!
i like your work alot. you have a disinctice style, truthful, and simple yet just as complicated as humans are, and oh boy! Aren't we complicated! anyway, you obviously love writing, and you should definitely keep it up!
- in writing you shall find solace, or shall you just find yourself?-
hey ur reviewing my stuff r u online? tell me if u reveiw again, ok!