for Bonds with Death5/23/2003 c1 
17ArwenStar914
Well, you already know how much I love this story. *grin* I like the parts you added, and aside from a few punctuation things, I only have one complaint. *I* know that you switch from the girl's perspective to the dragon's, but when you first read it, you think the girl's become a demon spirit and it's still her talking. Try to make it a bit clearer. I'll tell you if I get any ideas. Vetty good. =o) **ArwenStar**
17ArwenStar914Well, you already know how much I love this story. *grin* I like the parts you added, and aside from a few punctuation things, I only have one complaint. *I* know that you switch from the girl's perspective to the dragon's, but when you first read it, you think the girl's become a demon spirit and it's still her talking. Try to make it a bit clearer. I'll tell you if I get any ideas. Vetty good. =o) **ArwenStar**