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2/24/2007 c12 ANGEL992210
Sweet story.
2/2/2004 c12 Lais D Andrea
Congratulations once more! I got very emotioned with your story, it's great. I am happy that it has a happy end. Keep on writing!
6/18/2003 c1 me
interesting
6/17/2003 c12 5Autumn Pierce
Thank you so much for your reviews! I never expected to get such nice ones. I'm very glad that you enjoyed reading the story!
6/17/2003 c12 angelwings
That was the sweetest thing that I ever had the honor of reading. Sad and sweet all at the same time a truely woderful story. I can't give you enough praise. Character's such as Leslie,Tilly, and Ethan are amazing hard to come by in story's you did a great job.^_^ Also the ending was perfect.
6/16/2003 c12 25faery tragedy
Woah, I didn't know that was the end! But a marvelous story anyway. The change in Leslie was so prominent, anyone could tell. Your characters were very nicely developed.

I guess Ben wasn't so much a "brother" as he was a husband? Eh, it's good she found love once more. And the orphan kids! *Awwing sound rouses the audience*.

Great story. A read for everyone.

*Faery Tragedy
6/16/2003 c11 faery tragedy
No! He can't die! It's not fair! He was the only man who really took a loving interest in Leslie. You wrote it so wonderfully though. Absolutely tragic.

I like your character Ben. The cowboy rancher brother is just what this story needs, hehe. Please keep writing!

*Faery Tragedy
6/14/2003 c9 faery tragedy
Oh, I love to see how Leslie's life is progressing. The letters from her brothers were interesting. This story seems so real...and my new favourite character is Ella. She seems so kind and sweet. I guess we can all relate to knowing someone like that.

But I do agree with another reviewer, I think there should be a little more romance in store. But if you did not mean for this to have too much romance, I understand completely.

Keep writing!

*Faery Tragedy
6/11/2003 c7 angelwings
Perfect, now all you have do is update soon and I mean really soon^_- And as for the story I think you should show more of Leslina's brother's. And a tad more romance between her and Ethan.
6/10/2003 c1 5Autumn Pierce
Thank you so much for your wonderful comments!
6/9/2003 c6 15HistoryLover521
Not bad. I'd really like to see what happens next.
6/9/2003 c6 25faery tragedy
Wow, it looks like your story turn a big turn! I was really rooting for Leslie when she said she wanted to go to college and get a good education. Her parents are certainly unloving! Jebus!

The compassion Rosalie showed when Leslie went back to get her stuff was really surprising. You've really created some deep characters.

Keep writing!

*Faery Tragedy
6/8/2003 c5 2The Pink Toque
Ah! Her parents are ghastly! I understand the whole older sister getting married first but honestly, it dosn'e sound like Rosa is even trying, all she does is cry. Oh, I hope everything works out for Leslie and Ethan! When her parents said she could not go to college I was encouraging her to run away! Please update soon!
5/30/2003 c4 25faery tragedy
I so love when a "homely" character (who no one thought would ever be taken into consideration), finds love. It's great. And this chapter was too. Keep it up!

*Faery Tragedy
5/27/2003 c3 faery tragedy
Glorious piece, really. Leslie is a mirrored image of ourselves in those moments where we feel like nothing. It's so easy to relate to her. Rosalie seems a bit stereotypical, don't you think? Blonde hair, blue eyes, that seems to be the norm these days. But anyway, great read.

*Faery Tragedy

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