for Flapping8/24/2003 c1 
35waterlilypad
I love the contrasting feelings, and the simplicity of the statements that are the most important.
This inspires ME. I love your writing, I really do.
35waterlilypadI love the contrasting feelings, and the simplicity of the statements that are the most important.
This inspires ME. I love your writing, I really do.
7/24/2003 c1 Emma Louize
Wow, that was a good poem. Keep it up. ^_^makes me wanna fly. . . *jumps off roof*
Wow, that was a good poem. Keep it up. ^_^makes me wanna fly. . . *jumps off roof*
6/28/2003 c1 43James Rain
Why do you have so much talent. I never really read your poetry, but this is fantastic. Your words are so delicate, but aptly chosen. You do what a poet should, tel the word your personnal thoughts in such a way that connects with the reader. I loved it.
43James RainWhy do you have so much talent. I never really read your poetry, but this is fantastic. Your words are so delicate, but aptly chosen. You do what a poet should, tel the word your personnal thoughts in such a way that connects with the reader. I loved it.
6/28/2003 c1 1Pound
i like. worded well. good stanza break with "humans cannot fly" good concept. keep writing.
1Poundi like. worded well. good stanza break with "humans cannot fly" good concept. keep writing.
6/27/2003 c1 96Kenske
Like everybody else, this is a GREAT poem! ^_^ I have only two beefs with this, and they are...1)A tad more punctuation in areas to help with the rhythm. "a reminder that somethings simply exist
96KenskeLike everybody else, this is a GREAT poem! ^_^ I have only two beefs with this, and they are...1)A tad more punctuation in areas to help with the rhythm. "a reminder that somethings simply exist
6/26/2003 c1 106cosmo-queen
Excellent poem. This was just amazing. Extremely-well written and so meaningful and deep. I especially liked the stanzas about the wind and clouds. Great work, keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
106cosmo-queenExcellent poem. This was just amazing. Extremely-well written and so meaningful and deep. I especially liked the stanzas about the wind and clouds. Great work, keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
6/20/2003 c1 34Wasted Postage
Wouldn't it be wonderful to fly? I think it would. Another wonderful piece! Lovely, simply lovely!
34Wasted PostageWouldn't it be wonderful to fly? I think it would. Another wonderful piece! Lovely, simply lovely!
6/19/2003 c1 5Scars of Fantasy
I will keep my comments short and simple:
1. You are an amazing writer. Your style is so thought-provoking and heart-warming @ the same time-a rare combination.
2. Your poem was beautiful.
5Scars of FantasyI will keep my comments short and simple:
1. You are an amazing writer. Your style is so thought-provoking and heart-warming @ the same time-a rare combination.
2. Your poem was beautiful.
6/10/2003 c1 sistaB
keep them wings flappen grl
keep them wings flappen grl
6/8/2003 c1 31subtle1
Hey! It's been a while! How've you been? I miss talking to you! When you find the time, please email me, 'kay?
Great poem! Keep writing and keep up the superb work! You rock! ^-^ Take care!
Hugs,
subtle1
P.S. Hope to talk to you soon!
31subtle1Hey! It's been a while! How've you been? I miss talking to you! When you find the time, please email me, 'kay?
Great poem! Keep writing and keep up the superb work! You rock! ^-^ Take care!
Hugs,
subtle1
P.S. Hope to talk to you soon!
6/5/2003 c1 20Tristus
I loved that! I like deep poems they somehow make me feel more human (or maybe thats just me ). Write more please. Luv me x
20TristusI loved that! I like deep poems they somehow make me feel more human (or maybe thats just me ). Write more please. Luv me x
6/1/2003 c1 39squeak
this is another incredibly worded poem. the whole things induces a mixture of contrasting emotions...a feeling of hope and of inspiration, and also a feeling of desperation and of complete hopelessness, like the person is lost beyond all form of comprehension. its beautiful, really.
-jessie
39squeakthis is another incredibly worded poem. the whole things induces a mixture of contrasting emotions...a feeling of hope and of inspiration, and also a feeling of desperation and of complete hopelessness, like the person is lost beyond all form of comprehension. its beautiful, really.
-jessie
5/27/2003 c1 113tarnished oversoul
interesting... At the beginning of this, it honestly felt that you were going to go into an angst, but then you flap. Hope just jumps up in your face and does that. But hope is worse than despair- because it's hope that brings despair.
TO(Nice to see you writing!)
113tarnished oversoulinteresting... At the beginning of this, it honestly felt that you were going to go into an angst, but then you flap. Hope just jumps up in your face and does that. But hope is worse than despair- because it's hope that brings despair.
TO(Nice to see you writing!)