for Breaking12/10/2003 c1 vers le sud
I know the anguish you felt when you wrote this. Excellent way to evoke emotions! Keep writing.
I know the anguish you felt when you wrote this. Excellent way to evoke emotions! Keep writing.
8/18/2003 c1 
64not sure yet
again a slightly cliche' topic but still fairly well written, typo, dieing is suppose to be dying, and a huge pet peeve of mine is capitilizing the beginning of every line to a poem, find it very unnecessary, otherwise, its an emotional piece and a good purge and read, nicely done
64not sure yetagain a slightly cliche' topic but still fairly well written, typo, dieing is suppose to be dying, and a huge pet peeve of mine is capitilizing the beginning of every line to a poem, find it very unnecessary, otherwise, its an emotional piece and a good purge and read, nicely done