for Wind7/13/2003 c3 
89Stoffpferd
Cool, I liked that collection, although I don't really know much about types of wind. I enjoyed reading it! Well done!
~Stoffpferd~
89StoffpferdCool, I liked that collection, although I don't really know much about types of wind. I enjoyed reading it! Well done!
~Stoffpferd~
7/9/2003 c1 liquor knight
hell. you really meant haiku when you said it.
Damn short.
Too damn short.
hell...
this is not a flame :)
hell. you really meant haiku when you said it.
Damn short.
Too damn short.
hell...
this is not a flame :)
7/3/2003 c3 8Moril
The only possible improvement to this that I could suggest is changing "mini" to "tiny" - alliteration often enhances the feel of a "fun" poem, which I believe this is intended to be.
Otherwise, it's as excellent as the others!
8MorilThe only possible improvement to this that I could suggest is changing "mini" to "tiny" - alliteration often enhances the feel of a "fun" poem, which I believe this is intended to be.
Otherwise, it's as excellent as the others!
7/3/2003 c1 Moril
This is a great poem, again! You ar an excellent poet - I do a bit of haiku myself and this is excellent.
This is a great poem, again! You ar an excellent poet - I do a bit of haiku myself and this is excellent.
6/28/2003 c3 43PainHateJusticeRaceAndLife
hehehe...the 3rd one was cute (i couldnt find a better way to wor dit) and i really liked the wording on the 2nd one,great job on the haikus!
43PainHateJusticeRaceAndLifehehehe...the 3rd one was cute (i couldnt find a better way to wor dit) and i really liked the wording on the 2nd one,great job on the haikus!
6/14/2003 c1 22blessed-goddess
Because of your gorgeous review I had 2 review one of urs...if I havnt already! Perhaps this one should of been called Tornado...but u called it wind...oh im confusing myself!
22blessed-goddessBecause of your gorgeous review I had 2 review one of urs...if I havnt already! Perhaps this one should of been called Tornado...but u called it wind...oh im confusing myself!
5/31/2003 c2 blinkie
going great! i dont know what a zephyr feels like though. If it hit me in the face I wouldnt know it was a zephyr O.o. But it's very good haiku!
going great! i dont know what a zephyr feels like though. If it hit me in the face I wouldnt know it was a zephyr O.o. But it's very good haiku!