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7/13/2003 c3 89Stoffpferd
Cool, I liked that collection, although I don't really know much about types of wind. I enjoyed reading it! Well done!

7/9/2003 c3 1liquor knight
and just 3...?

7/9/2003 c1 liquor knight
hell. you really meant haiku when you said it.

Damn short.

Too damn short.


this is not a flame :)
7/3/2003 c3 8Moril
The only possible improvement to this that I could suggest is changing "mini" to "tiny" - alliteration often enhances the feel of a "fun" poem, which I believe this is intended to be.

Otherwise, it's as excellent as the others!
7/3/2003 c2 Moril
You seem to be fond of the word "ephemeral." Another masterpiece.
7/3/2003 c1 Moril
This is a great poem, again! You ar an excellent poet - I do a bit of haiku myself and this is excellent.
6/28/2003 c3 43PainHateJusticeRaceAndLife
hehehe...the 3rd one was cute (i couldnt find a better way to wor dit) and i really liked the wording on the 2nd one,great job on the haikus!
6/14/2003 c1 22blessed-goddess
Because of your gorgeous review I had 2 review one of urs...if I havnt already! Perhaps this one should of been called Tornado...but u called it wind...oh im confusing myself!
6/6/2003 c1 319ALK214
Great haiku. I like it.
6/4/2003 c3 41InkedinSin
hehe...liked the 3d one a lot.
6/3/2003 c1 SerAnonima
5/31/2003 c3 2blinkie
aw...so cute! they're having fun! ^_^
5/31/2003 c2 blinkie
going great! i dont know what a zephyr feels like though. If it hit me in the face I wouldnt know it was a zephyr O.o. But it's very good haiku!
5/31/2003 c1 blinkie
nice haiku! and very true too. ^_^
5/31/2003 c3 34Smoky Bear
nice haikus
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