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5/22/2003 c1 Gemtog4319
Well, I'm supposed to tell you something that you need to improve. And if I must, I have one suggestion. MORE FIGHTING SCENES! Those are big time boo yeah! BOO YEAH BOO YEAH UNH! AHZAH!
5/22/2003 c1 FreeFly
Feels like I'm a supernatural being... I guess I've watched too many jap. animations.

pretty cool
5/21/2003 c1 64not sure yet
o, kool, i like it muchly, love the idea of it, even if i dont know that much bout tornadoes, the confusion turned rage part got to me, anywayz, great job!
5/21/2003 c1 100Keep it 100
Great way to start off your collection!

~Heart of the Sword
5/21/2003 c1 15Isay
Very nice, and it describes tornadoes perfectly...

Write the next 'chapter' soon!

~Isay
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