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1/11/2004 c1 28frugale
This IS the most beautiful "rain" haiku ever. I love your constant celestial references.
8/14/2003 c1 thisisover
ooh, nicee... very very sweet. the words are so smooth.
7/22/2003 c1 161chairmanmeow
I love the rain! And this haiku too! Going on my fave list...
7/17/2003 c1 80Plato's Optic Runaway
::sigh:: gorgeous. you have talent. keep it! i love the second line.
7/12/2003 c1 1Midnight Scribbles
this is really... i cant describe it, but i like it.
7/4/2003 c1 lainxauber
Soft, soothing, meditative...a good piece of writing.
7/1/2003 c1 17Winged One1
"Like soft caress of Venus"? Wow...how'd you come up with that? It's so nice.

winged one
6/14/2003 c1 unforeseen
Heh, short and beautiful. Do you want to trade writing abilities? jk. XD

-Euro-=-
6/14/2003 c1 200Ashes of a Willow
very good! ;)
6/13/2003 c1 37Sunflower Philosophy
:) I always click on anything titled Rain because of my song "Rain", and the love of rain that's behind it... sometimes I'm disappointed, sometimes amused, and sometimes it's like the skies just opened and poured a pure, beautiful shower of rain right into my soul.

This was one of them. I mean, in a haiku you can either say very little, or a lot with just a few words. Maybe because of the personal meaning of rain to me, but this one was so, so beautiful.

In short, I loved it!

m~* Sunflower, anyone?
6/5/2003 c1 Kyalia
Beautiful, and I love myth references!
6/4/2003 c1 35Mime
Rain is essential to life...
6/2/2003 c1 34Smoky Bear
rain is lovely... brings renewel... u write nice haiku...
6/1/2003 c1 15Isay
Very nice... I love the second line...

~Isay
6/1/2003 c1 128Zainab
Nicely written
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