
1/11/2004 c1
28frugale
This IS the most beautiful "rain" haiku ever. I love your constant celestial references.

This IS the most beautiful "rain" haiku ever. I love your constant celestial references.
7/17/2003 c1
80Plato's Optic Runaway
::sigh:: gorgeous. you have talent. keep it! i love the second line.

::sigh:: gorgeous. you have talent. keep it! i love the second line.
7/1/2003 c1
17Winged One1
"Like soft caress of Venus"? Wow...how'd you come up with that? It's so nice.
winged one

"Like soft caress of Venus"? Wow...how'd you come up with that? It's so nice.
winged one
6/14/2003 c1 unforeseen
Heh, short and beautiful. Do you want to trade writing abilities? jk. XD
-Euro-=-
Heh, short and beautiful. Do you want to trade writing abilities? jk. XD
-Euro-=-
6/13/2003 c1
37Sunflower Philosophy
:) I always click on anything titled Rain because of my song "Rain", and the love of rain that's behind it... sometimes I'm disappointed, sometimes amused, and sometimes it's like the skies just opened and poured a pure, beautiful shower of rain right into my soul.
This was one of them. I mean, in a haiku you can either say very little, or a lot with just a few words. Maybe because of the personal meaning of rain to me, but this one was so, so beautiful.
In short, I loved it!
m~* Sunflower, anyone?

:) I always click on anything titled Rain because of my song "Rain", and the love of rain that's behind it... sometimes I'm disappointed, sometimes amused, and sometimes it's like the skies just opened and poured a pure, beautiful shower of rain right into my soul.
This was one of them. I mean, in a haiku you can either say very little, or a lot with just a few words. Maybe because of the personal meaning of rain to me, but this one was so, so beautiful.
In short, I loved it!
m~* Sunflower, anyone?