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8/1/2001 c1 1Ashavah aka JK
A nice portrayal of the confusion love can bring. :-) A bit of punctuation wouldn't go astray, though, and a couple of the images were a bit cliché, but this is a really nice poem. :-)
6/1/2001 c1 6Devonia Lea Fairlight
I can tell you put a ton of emotion into that. It really touched a place in my heart. (same situation and all) By the way, excellent rhyming sceme. :) *)
1/7/2001 c1 Moonhawk
Nice! I really like this poem. :) Hi Nijuu, I'm Kyuugou

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