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7/18/2003 c1 4Chord
Compelling. The transition inbetween the last four lines was brilliant, abstract images to intangibility itself.

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6/19/2003 c1 26sweetspontaneous
i love this. "...like a stray cat...just wanting more" i like the connections between the thought and what is being said, and the conversational tone. it reminds me, for no reason i can think of, of a poem by elizabeth bishop called "one art"

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