for Dearly Beloved3/16/2015 c59 OliverMarco
I hate you for killing them ! Like... I loved this story and even fell in love with Matt and then... Shattered !
I hate you for killing them ! Like... I loved this story and even fell in love with Matt and then... Shattered !
1/15/2015 c61 Guest
A waste of fucking time. 80% of the story made sense, and then you were like "fuck it". No one needs to see the main characters killed off. A stroke? Heroin? Aerin the Asshole?
A waste of fucking time. 80% of the story made sense, and then you were like "fuck it". No one needs to see the main characters killed off. A stroke? Heroin? Aerin the Asshole?
7/15/2014 c63 
4rockspapersnscissors
Firstly, I offer my condolences to Hope over the loss of her modem.
I hope the two of ya'll can reunite soon! I'm looking forward to any future writings from the two of you.
Overall, I loved the story, the two of you have a very animated way of making the story come to life-! I can't be completely biased... because you killed off my favorite couple and ... er... couples '(/-_-)/... but, I understand my biggest problem with the story was my own hopelessly romantic heart!
The two of ya'll combined so many aspects of life into a single story, though it was an incredibly long read, I enjoyed every chapter! Thanks for the great read, and awesome job, ya'll two! :')
RPS
4rockspapersnscissorsFirstly, I offer my condolences to Hope over the loss of her modem.
I hope the two of ya'll can reunite soon! I'm looking forward to any future writings from the two of you.
Overall, I loved the story, the two of you have a very animated way of making the story come to life-! I can't be completely biased... because you killed off my favorite couple and ... er... couples '(/-_-)/... but, I understand my biggest problem with the story was my own hopelessly romantic heart!
The two of ya'll combined so many aspects of life into a single story, though it was an incredibly long read, I enjoyed every chapter! Thanks for the great read, and awesome job, ya'll two! :')
RPS
7/15/2014 c62 rockspapersnscissors
The newer ending it cute and sweet, I think for first time readers it would be best, a more 'its for the best' kinda feel towards the ending. However, the original has more angst, and I think it promotes more literary realism toward the overall story... :/ I still hate that they died tho (._)
-RPS
The newer ending it cute and sweet, I think for first time readers it would be best, a more 'its for the best' kinda feel towards the ending. However, the original has more angst, and I think it promotes more literary realism toward the overall story... :/ I still hate that they died tho (._)
-RPS
7/15/2014 c61 rockspapersnscissors
I'm not so sure about the 'bonus' chapter thing... it seems kinda pointless to add a cute chapter of the two after you've killed off the characters!.; ... yes full on snarky attitude intended! :P
I'm not so sure about the 'bonus' chapter thing... it seems kinda pointless to add a cute chapter of the two after you've killed off the characters!.; ... yes full on snarky attitude intended! :P
7/15/2014 c60 rockspapersnscissors
Are you going with a rebirth thing? O.o I'm kinda confused, I see the similarities tho
BTW: I forgot to mention in the last chapter, you said the age difference between Matt and Sean was 9 months; however, in a previous chapter you said it was 8 months... I'm pretty sure... possibly ... 89%... positive.
-RPS
Are you going with a rebirth thing? O.o I'm kinda confused, I see the similarities tho
BTW: I forgot to mention in the last chapter, you said the age difference between Matt and Sean was 9 months; however, in a previous chapter you said it was 8 months... I'm pretty sure... possibly ... 89%... positive.
-RPS
7/14/2014 c17 rockspapersnscissors
... :'(
That was so mother' f'n evil... how could you do that?
I was like totally crying!
I'm so happy you didn't kill off Matt!
RPS
... :'(
That was so mother' f'n evil... how could you do that?
I was like totally crying!
I'm so happy you didn't kill off Matt!
RPS
7/14/2014 c16 rockspapersnscissors
Oh my fuck'n god! (TT) HOW COULD YOU KILL MATT?
I'm heart broken right now...
Oh my fuck'n god! (TT) HOW COULD YOU KILL MATT?
I'm heart broken right now...
8/10/2012 c6 T.Whittman
Hm seemed like a good story but things went way to fast and seemed unreal sorry but why would he invite someone to there house when they first met instead of like a library.? Gona stop reading here but like this story idea just feel there should be more space between each event.
Hm seemed like a good story but things went way to fast and seemed unreal sorry but why would he invite someone to there house when they first met instead of like a library.? Gona stop reading here but like this story idea just feel there should be more space between each event.
3/22/2012 c59 1sunny-california
:'( honestly I really started tearing up when nate died after that is that like adding salt to a wound you stated killing off all these awesome characters. Idk but couldnt there have been a surprising twist ending where in actually nate , jake, mat, and sean were really vampires? Really good story though. One of my favorites.
1sunny-california:'( honestly I really started tearing up when nate died after that is that like adding salt to a wound you stated killing off all these awesome characters. Idk but couldnt there have been a surprising twist ending where in actually nate , jake, mat, and sean were really vampires? Really good story though. One of my favorites.