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6/5/2006 c62 Waiting for Never
i really love this story. It was the first one i read when i joined fictionpress. I must say that i like chapter 59 better than the new alternate ending. The other one had me cring from start to finish. Good Job
6/5/2006 c62 2Jack-Dio
i think i might cry

the altertnate ending was beautiful
6/5/2006 c62 Silver Sparklze
*melts*

...Aw...

Very good, love the new ending to hell and back.
6/4/2006 c62 J.D. California
so beautiful
6/4/2006 c62 7K. T. Wood
Hey.

Read both endings...personally I like the first ending better... it was sad, but seemed much more realistic. But I'm sure you two know which one you like better. Good luck with everything. Let us know what happens with the book...
6/4/2006 c62 65Aquafied
thank you. weak hearted me couldnt take the other ending

this is almost surreal and i love it. really, truly love it
6/4/2006 c62 41Stefen
Aw, that was really nice. : ) I miss this story...
6/1/2006 c1 Hollie
I'm honestly not sure weather to kiss you or kill you for this story, i mean, it was so touching, and i'm bawling my eyes out at the moment, i couldn't even read the whole of the chapter where Matty -snif- dies -snif- Thank you so much for writing this...
5/19/2006 c61 2paledaisy78
well, im glad you didn't make me wait to see whether the fight was resolved or not! ha, very good, i loved it. one question though, how did Sean get into Matt's room?
5/13/2006 c18 MustardTofu
Its really good . the part where you said matt died...well we all know how that turned out anyways just really impressed
5/10/2006 c2 Kate
i love ur story! I read most of it before and forgot the name..lol...for the snoting pixie stix...it's not nice...hurts the nose..lol
5/6/2006 c61 65Aquafied
aw, thats like giving candy to the children.

i think of the wig as a monty python wig, really.

(and it seems in stories, not a lot of people share stupid inside jokes. then again, i dont know how they would look on paper)

oh so dramatic
5/6/2006 c60 Aquafied
ah, Shawn (i saw the slip with sean, heehee)

and Mr. Gray (english gentleman)

both gay. i am seing patterns
5/6/2006 c59 Aquafied
oh godyou killed off everyone

ah. why are they dying at 60?

matty and sean no.

(i was kind of thinking that jake would follow nate, because that just who jake is.

they are up and down but still, love each other)

god this rips my heart out. i feel like someone i know died.

*sob*
5/6/2006 c58 Aquafied
oh my god

did you have to rip all of ours hearts out and burn

oh wow. just wowso young to die
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