for Dearly Beloved2/14/2009 c63 Keela1221
This is probably the best (and longest) story I have read on the internet. You guys did a wonderfull job, and yeah I freggin balled when everyone died. Great story! I really liked how you guys went through their whole lives, and of cource that you did a chapter on Bri beating up the guy. Great story!
This is probably the best (and longest) story I have read on the internet. You guys did a wonderfull job, and yeah I freggin balled when everyone died. Great story! I really liked how you guys went through their whole lives, and of cource that you did a chapter on Bri beating up the guy. Great story!
2/14/2009 c13 Keela1221
Not done with the story yet, but its really great! I balled during this chapter, its just so sweetly sad. Great story!
Not done with the story yet, but its really great! I balled during this chapter, its just so sweetly sad. Great story!
1/11/2009 c62 quackerrox
This story was amazing.
I cried three times, your an amazing author.
Def. one of my fav stories.
This story was amazing.
I cried three times, your an amazing author.
Def. one of my fav stories.
9/26/2008 c63 DefineNightmare
Okay,I'm still sad about the dying episodes with Sean,Matt,Jake, and Nate! I was telling my mom about it, and even she cried!
Hope you update sooN!
Okay,I'm still sad about the dying episodes with Sean,Matt,Jake, and Nate! I was telling my mom about it, and even she cried!
Hope you update sooN!
9/25/2008 c59 DefineNightmare
I swear, in this whole hour (20 minutes to read this chapter and chapter 58) I cried so much! I mean I stopped crying, then I started to feel very sad and cried again, and again! I'm actually bawling my eyes out...
I swear, in this whole hour (20 minutes to read this chapter and chapter 58) I cried so much! I mean I stopped crying, then I started to feel very sad and cried again, and again! I'm actually bawling my eyes out...
9/22/2008 c2 DefineNightmare
Cool! I think that's really sweet of Matt! I'm gonna read the rest.
(About the quote- It burns! Lol. Trust me, it burns for like 15 minutes.)
Cool! I think that's really sweet of Matt! I'm gonna read the rest.
(About the quote- It burns! Lol. Trust me, it burns for like 15 minutes.)
9/12/2008 c6 blackandwhitemiko
strange fact i felt like sharing: I wanted to know the actual dictionary definition of nymphomaniac and found out that it's "Uncontrollable or excessive sexual desire in a WOMAN! the male word is satyriasis! weird...
strange fact i felt like sharing: I wanted to know the actual dictionary definition of nymphomaniac and found out that it's "Uncontrollable or excessive sexual desire in a WOMAN! the male word is satyriasis! weird...
8/15/2008 c1 
1precipice492
i originally started reding this because i saw how many reviews ot had and thought that with that ,many there had to be somthing good about it, this story is awsome so far! I guess theres someting to be said about review numbers! :)
1precipice492i originally started reding this because i saw how many reviews ot had and thought that with that ,many there had to be somthing good about it, this story is awsome so far! I guess theres someting to be said about review numbers! :)
7/24/2008 c48 Arisa Ash
I just started reading this a couple days ago, and look how far I got! I normally don't review in the middle of complete stories, but I hat to this chapter. "Mmhmm. You know us Americans. Always with the sex." Seriously, that made me giggle-snort. XD
And you know, since I'm here, I may as well actually review.
I actually prefer Jake and Nate over Matt and Sean for some reason. I just love the smaller build that Nate has and how he's into dance and more "feminine" things. And then Jake is such a hard-ass with a traumatizing past. Then for the worlds most amazing coincidence, their fathers who they didn't know for most of their lives are gay and together. Simply amazing. :]
Anyways, onward to the next chapter!
~ R!n
I just started reading this a couple days ago, and look how far I got! I normally don't review in the middle of complete stories, but I hat to this chapter. "Mmhmm. You know us Americans. Always with the sex." Seriously, that made me giggle-snort. XD
And you know, since I'm here, I may as well actually review.
I actually prefer Jake and Nate over Matt and Sean for some reason. I just love the smaller build that Nate has and how he's into dance and more "feminine" things. And then Jake is such a hard-ass with a traumatizing past. Then for the worlds most amazing coincidence, their fathers who they didn't know for most of their lives are gay and together. Simply amazing. :]
Anyways, onward to the next chapter!
~ R!n
6/30/2008 c10 3Ty Taco
I LOVE YOUR STORY!
I'm only on 10...but I am definitely gonna keep reading!
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox,
Ty
3Ty TacoI LOVE YOUR STORY!
I'm only on 10...but I am definitely gonna keep reading!
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox,
Ty
6/29/2008 c63 acousticbruises
Read this AGAIN on my way up to Canada today, as usual, great read... it just doesn't get old for me =)
Cheers & luff
Read this AGAIN on my way up to Canada today, as usual, great read... it just doesn't get old for me =)
Cheers & luff
5/22/2008 c63 8Seeker of Knowledge
i really like ur story... have u given up on it or has your modem just been down for a realy long time? ^.^
please write another chapter
*whistles, bells and applauses, etc.*
(^) ...yaoi is fun... (^
8Seeker of Knowledgei really like ur story... have u given up on it or has your modem just been down for a realy long time? ^.^
please write another chapter
*whistles, bells and applauses, etc.*
(^) ...yaoi is fun... (^
4/30/2008 c2 oppsy
Your americans keep speaking English ... hahahah err, what i meant was they keep using british slang. you probably haven't noticeed because it seems normal to you but the beginning chapters could be rervised for that. gothboy's influence after can affect how others talk but the beginning chapters they're pure americans without uk influence.
Your americans keep speaking English ... hahahah err, what i meant was they keep using british slang. you probably haven't noticeed because it seems normal to you but the beginning chapters could be rervised for that. gothboy's influence after can affect how others talk but the beginning chapters they're pure americans without uk influence.